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On the seventh day of creation God rested, it had been a very busy week of creating; he looked at all he had done with a sigh, praying that everything would go as planned. I also rest on the seventh day and think, I thank God for my existence and this world; and I rest my mind and my soul and body, just like God must have done on his seventh day. I am sure each seventh day he must look down, for things have not gone exactly as planned; he reaches out his hand to us to help the way but so many just want to work or play that day. God, must have been so tired on the seventh day, look at the beautiful world he created for us; and the beautiful world he watches being destroyed, I imagine he must weep each seventh day. _____________________ October 23, 2018 Poetry/Verse/On The Seventh Day Copyright Protected, ID 18-1077-521-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 11/9/2018 3:02:00 PM
Carolyn thanks for the visit and great comment ~
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Date: 10/24/2018 11:30:00 AM
Yes, I'm sure God is disappointed in the way we have treated each other and our environment, destroying some of the beauty He created. Your poem touches my heart, and I wish you success in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 10/24/2018 9:21:00 AM
Sand and Victor thanks for those great comments~
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Date: 10/23/2018 7:11:00 PM
seems it says somewhere in the oldt testament that the blessed anointing 'oil and incense' were of the cannibus plant...so, on sundays god's 'minds' anointed/incensed themselves that they might be blessed by god on the seventh day? : )
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