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on the edge of dreams night takes a hold of my life the moon and stars sing

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Date: 11/20/2023 5:32:00 AM
Beautiful photo--beautiful poem, Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/20/2023 3:02:00 PM
thanks, Vijay, for your visit and kind words. Have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 11/19/2023 11:21:00 PM
I love this Sara, a very sweet write <3
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/20/2023 4:46:00 AM
thanks for your visit, Bj and for your kind words. Have a splendid day, Sara
Date: 11/19/2023 6:58:00 PM
This poem has a superb melding of words and photo. The subject is stated in a few meaningful words.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/20/2023 4:47:00 AM
thank you kindly, Hilda, for your complimentary words. They mean a great deal to me. Have a pleasant day, Sara
Date: 11/19/2023 6:55:00 PM
A thriller-chiller of a pic-poem combo, Sara. Whoa! Sends shivers up and down my central nervous system. A 4 Anxiety
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/20/2023 4:48:00 AM
I appreciate your visit, Gershon. An 'A4' anxiety level...wow! I guess living on the edge will do that. (smiles) Have a pleasant day and (as you said) here's to a great week, Sara
Date: 11/19/2023 6:46:00 PM
Dear Sara, your writing is exquisitely beautiful, generating a waterfall of visions with delicate and sophisticated word choices. The image and poetry composition are fascinating, capturing the moon's and stars' ethereal harmony. The colorful visuals offered are a visual treat.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/20/2023 4:50:00 AM
thank you for your visit and for your supportive and almost magical accolades. I liked 'waterfall of visions'--there's a poem somewhere in those words (smiles) I'm grateful for your ongoing encouragement with your outstanding comments. May you have a blessed day, your poetess friend, Sara
Date: 11/19/2023 5:44:00 PM
Gorgeous writing. Loved the "dreaminess" you created...
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/20/2023 4:51:00 AM
thank you, Paige, for stopping by. I like the 'dreamy' quality too. Have a splendid day, Sara
Date: 11/19/2023 5:29:00 PM
lovely poem, Sara, inciting for more dreams, so subtle words to share, have a sweeet day
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/20/2023 4:52:00 AM
good to see you, Yann! Thanks for stopping by. I'm glad you found my poem lovely in its subtly. Have a splendid day, too. Wishing you well, Sara
Date: 11/19/2023 5:23:00 PM
Lovely image and poem. I enjoy how the moon and stars sings. Great imagery.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/20/2023 3:01:00 PM
thank you, kind Karen! I appreciate your thoughtful comments and continued support. Have a pleasant day! Sara
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/20/2023 4:53:00 AM
thank you, kind Karen! I appreciate your thoughtful comments and continued support. Have a pleasant day! Sara

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