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On the Door

On the door... Where it all began You smile and I did too We shakehands in two On the door... You opened gently wide I enter past your side My gaze around glide On the door... You lean and watch Dashing sometimes to catch Hands up to extend much On the door.. We waited for minutes long Careful not to commit wrong Concern and care, I see along On the door... Finally, the beginning of end Of the night, noting any offense Don't query, things not heavy but dense by: olive_eloi 11:35am 01/20/2014 --------------------»»»» door.. they are anywhere.. When open maybe brings anew.. When half close maybe it haunts you

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Date: 11/24/2014 12:13:00 PM
My door is anew, thanks to two, James :)
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Date: 1/20/2014 6:11:00 AM
Another write that is awesome it has two meanings.I see tthe spiritual side to it of God opening doors for us and arms stretched out to help us. :-). Good job my friend
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