On the Cusp of Job

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His sons used to take turns holding feasts in their homes…when a period of feasting had run its course, Job would send and have them purified. Early in the morning he would sacrifice a burnt offering for each of them, thinking, “Perhaps my children have sinned and cursed God in their hearts.”  

 Job 1:5 NIV

ON THE CUSP OF JOB

On the cusp of Job,
we find his sons
and daughters
feasting apart,
their hearts failing
their father and God.

On the cusp of Job’s
disasters, he purifies
and teaches.
He loves his kin
ever so much.

On the cusp of life’s 
divide, Job’s priestly
responsibilities. Serious
as mannah delivered 
every morning
to the hungry crowd.

On the cusp of pain
and sorrow, too great
for one man to take -
yet down the line
we find Jesus’ sacrifice.

On the cusp of this generation,
do we nudge our children 
toward salvation or perdition?
Do we teach them to have
a lively faith?

7/6/2022

Final verse inspired by words from Ellicott’s Commentary

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 7/13/2022 9:02:00 AM
Awesome write, one thing christains don't understand is that Satan had to get permission from God to smite him. He has to get the same permission from God to put us thru trials. This is done by God to build our strength , our character, and most of all our faith. Count it all joy Kim. Blessings Carl
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2022 9:32:00 AM
Amen, Carl! We grow afraid of what grows us strong. Be blessed!
Date: 7/10/2022 2:01:00 AM
Who could ever forget the trails of Job once read. I often think about him keeping his faith through the worst of the worst. An inspiring poem Kim. Blessings xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2022 9:32:00 AM
Thank you, dear Connie!
Date: 7/9/2022 7:01:00 AM
Oh, such a lovely tale of the tale Kim. Nicely written! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2022 9:32:00 AM
I thank you, Linda!
Date: 7/7/2022 8:14:00 AM
Wonderful insight into the story of Job. Thanks for the thoughts through your poetry, Kim. As parents, sometimes our lack of action speaks louder than our words of guidance to our children. God help us to be good examples of godly living. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 7/13/2022 9:33:00 AM
Glad this spoke to you as it does to me too! God bless!
Date: 7/7/2022 7:16:00 AM
Kim, I believe you've done an excellent job of illustrating the stress that may occur in real life by using this example. Our children are not being taught the proper way to conduct their lives by us.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2022 9:33:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad! Be blessed!
Date: 7/7/2022 1:23:00 AM
Final question makes me shudder. We are not teaching our children how to live correctly. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2022 9:34:00 AM
And it should…make us all think and act…deliver ~ be blessed, dear friend!
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