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On the Crest of a Wave

On the crest of a wave, riding high Stop it, stop the words "the end is nigh" Just enjoy the moment, that's what I crave Riding high, on the crest of a wave Contrasts enhance, high and low Living is about going with the flow Be happy maybe take the chance High and low, contrasts enhance Navigate the ocean, follow the stars Don't imprison yourself behind invisible bars Embrace the joy, when you get the notion Follow the stars, navigate the ocean

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/26/2023 4:35:00 AM

Amazing work, DD:-) I enjoyed it tremendously. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/26/2023 7:51:00 AM

I do love a tremendous - thank you :)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 9/5/2023 1:44:00 PM

Once again your poetry delivers for me. Nothing sugar coated through adjective layering. Your words are sharp, crisp + each line has punch. Congratulations! Your postings speak with an original voice. Cheers, Brian

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/5/2023 2:41:00 PM

Thank you Brian, your enthusiastic commentary is much appreciated :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/9/2023 3:24:00 PM

a beautiful and precious message, helped by gracious images, enjoyed

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/9/2023 3:33:00 PM

Thank you Yann - I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)