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On the Brink

Here I stand, on the brink, Like a house on a cliff, Ready to fall anytime, Crashing into the rocks below, But I have seen such houses, Weathering severe storms, Staying put for years, I wonder, can I do the same? Here I stand, on the brink, Ready to accept my fate, With all the loss and animosity, I have reached the end of line, But then I remember, The lone tree on the hill, Rain or hail, wind or drought, It lives on, a proud survivor, Though alone but alive, I wonder, could I do the same?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/19/2024 7:05:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 11:08:00 AM
Ankit, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 3/24/2015 4:27:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup my friend. I enjoyed reading this one. Peace and blessings.
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Date: 3/15/2015 1:08:00 PM
A beautiful poem # 7... nad
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Date: 3/14/2015 9:05:00 PM
I love everything about this poem. SKAT
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