On the Brink

Here I stand, on the brink,
Like a house on a cliff,
Ready to fall anytime,
Crashing into the rocks below,
But I have seen such houses,
Weathering severe storms,
Staying put for years,
I wonder, can I do the same?
Here I stand, on the brink,
Ready to accept my fate,
With all the loss and animosity,
I have reached the end of line,
But then I remember,
The lone tree on the hill,
Rain or hail, wind or drought,
It lives on, a proud survivor,
Though alone but alive,
I wonder, could I do the same?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 7:05 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Ankit, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Henderson Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 4:27 PM
Welcome to the Soup my friend. I enjoyed reading this one. Peace and blessings.
Relish Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 1:08 PM
A beautiful poem # 7... nad
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March 14, 2015 at 9:05 PM
I love everything about this poem. SKAT
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