On the Beach In Nice

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on the beach in nice sea laps tongues caress a french kiss in silhouette ~ amour through sunset Sensual poetry contest Sponsored by: Charlotte Puddifoot Syllable counter 5/7/5 05/02/21

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Akkina Downing

Date: 2/7/2021 3:50:00 PM

Picture perfect, poem sensually beautiful :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/8/2021 1:21:00 AM

Thank you Akkina, hey are you on a beach somewhere, I’m so jealous, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 2/7/2021 12:46:00 PM

A picture in word's David

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/7/2021 1:07:00 PM

It is Christopher, but I think it needed the picture, for effect cheers David

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/5/2021 8:35:00 PM

One does not have to go to the French Riviera to do that. Nicely written.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/6/2021 12:14:00 AM

Indeed Robert, but fitted in better with my overall picture and poem, capturing their moment, cheers David