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On Stopping To Sniff A Dandelion

I believe, I may have missed the boat The water’s deep, I couldn’t float Perhaps the marks I set weren’t high The tide’s in now – I’ll wave bye-bye I read Thoreau and Frost, I know Of wilderness and falling snow Of Roads Not Taken tongue in cheek Of singing trees and babbling creek With pomp and ceremony flyin’ I stopped to sniff a dandelion To watch a honey bee rejoice At making such a tasty choice I sit beside the croaking pond A heron blending with the frond A muskrat watches warily A dragonfly upon my knee My pants are frayed, my kayak weathered I share my time with furred and feathered Visiting these woods, their home Leave them, as I came, alone

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Date: 7/28/2024 8:48:00 AM
Lovely! Thanks for taking us along this adventure and allowing to enjoy nature. Great write.
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Date: 7/28/2024 7:09:00 AM
Clever mind romp with plenty to take in...a pleasure to read John. The last line a clincher.
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Date: 7/27/2024 8:33:00 PM
Me lik'em poem! ~ Big Chief Yellownose
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Date: 7/27/2024 2:11:00 PM
A good poem with a good message. I like the sound of camping in your poem.
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Date: 7/27/2024 11:07:00 AM
john, i really like the imagery and the rhymes in this poem. lovely!
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Date: 7/27/2024 6:15:00 AM
John this is absolutely delightful it brings the reader a sense of calm, I especially love the thought of someone sniffing a dandelion - i just leave that to the bees lol - On Wednesday I saw my first EVER dragonfly since I've lived on the island. this poem is a gem John! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/27/2024 6:10:00 AM
Dandelions have a buttery scent that I’d prefer to the aroma of roses… worth stopping to sniff. These verses are off the chart in placing readers in the scene. Mentioning Thoreau and Frost was an excellent touch.
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