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on shores of dead sea seawater evaporates makes plenty of salt February 2, 2018

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Date: 2/9/2023 8:47:00 PM
Once had the experience of floating in the dead sea ! It was quite thrilling . Great Haiku !
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Date: 1/9/2019 11:41:00 AM
Hi Vijay, love the content of your Haiku. Your words paint a wonderful image. Have a wonderful Wednesday. your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 8/22/2018 11:15:00 AM
in dead sea..living people float..in others..dead people float..perhaps you could make a haiku out of it..you are quite talented
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Date: 2/6/2018 12:30:00 PM
Good haiku--well-written and informative, Vijay! Janice
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Date: 2/4/2018 9:53:00 PM
Nicely done Vijay...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/5/2018 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 2/4/2018 9:59:00 AM
Amazing Haiku. I enjoyed this Vijay :) Perfect with the photo.
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Date: 2/4/2018 10:49:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 2/3/2018 11:17:00 PM
Love the image Vijay and the Haiku says it all. I've never actually witnessed it...Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2018 6:27:00 AM
Thank you Maria..appreciate the comments.
Date: 2/3/2018 7:31:00 PM
that salt looks like waves or like snow. You should write on that too!! Nice one, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2018 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 2/3/2018 5:28:00 PM
the shore is beautiful in the photo is that really whitecaps of salt.. poem is great to compliment the photo.. Hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2018 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Eve...yes..its all salt.
Date: 2/3/2018 12:25:00 PM
- Too salty, Vijay - Excellent written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2018 6:25:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 2/3/2018 7:01:00 AM
I've seen those before...great message too...All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2018 6:25:00 AM
Thank you Arturo.
Date: 2/3/2018 6:38:00 AM
Awesome haiku!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2018 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Silent One.

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