ON SEA BEACH

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11/11/23

Tetractys Contest

Second Place

by Ink Empress

ON SEA BEACH Me supine on sea beach. Bare feet to play with lose sand grains to scroll, scatter or slip. Above: Sapphire sky showing fluffy clouds. Lavender line horizon kissing sea.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:48:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Tetractys poem in Ink Empress contest, Anisha :) - hugs

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/18/2023 8:13:00 AM

Nicely written, Anisha. I'm quite impressed, my compliments on your win, my friend. Aloha, William

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 5:16:00 AM

I love the imagery painted in this and your use of gems and descriptive diction stood out for me. Love “ sapphire sky” “ lavender line” those slight alliterations adds beauty to your take. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your well deserved win

Daisy Meadows

Date: 11/11/2023 1:30:00 AM

Beautiful poem! Well done.

Brenda J. Joyce

Date: 11/10/2023 9:00:00 PM

Enjoyed thanks for posting