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On Passion's Tide

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A storm blew in when I peered into his dark eyes Fearing lightning would strike in bolts of midnight fire Wanting his touch, though it might lead to my demise Then full lips swept over mine, igniting desire Thunder roared in my head with each deepening kiss I heard it drumming in warm breaths against my ear Fingertips danced lightly over naked skin. This symphony sings in my heart each time he draws near Desperate urges and needs filled my torrid mind I murmured in soft sighs against his stubbled cheek whispers of hunger, I'd never before defined He sated my desires when they reached fever peak Storms are strong passionate tempests at this man's side We ride on crashing waves higher than at flood tide

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 7/7/2024 4:48:00 AM

A wonderful Sonnet, my friend. A very romantic write.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/7/2024 6:31:00 AM

Thank you for acknowledging this one so kindly, Jerry.

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 7/6/2024 9:39:00 PM

A beautifully romantic write, Lin. Loved it. Wishing you the beautiful Sunday, my friend.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/7/2024 6:31:00 AM

Your remarks are very much appreciated, Zyrool.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/6/2024 7:00:00 PM

Beautiful, sensual and romantic, a lovely sonnet Lin… Beryl

Lin Lane
Date: 7/7/2024 6:30:00 AM

Thank you very much, dear Beryl. And thank you for not aiming your hurricane winds any closer to New Orleans than Texas. That's been a doozy of a storm... so far.

Gary Radice

Date: 7/6/2024 1:04:00 PM

The Queen of Steam does it again! You do realize that I have to open a window now just to cool down?.. I don't think I'd ever make it to the end of any romantic novel you write Lin :) I've also learnt a new word today: "sated". I thought at first it was a misspelling of "stated" but No!.."to satisfy to the full" . That totally sums up your poem for me. :) Cheers - Gary

Lin Lane
Date: 7/7/2024 6:29:00 AM

Well, Gary... now you given me a name that I can wave in front of Jan when she reminds us that she's been labeled 'The Queen of Poop!' Seriously, I appreciate your time of reading and leaving such great comments. They sated me, poetically. ;-)

Mark Koplin

Date: 7/6/2024 9:16:00 AM

This is a very romantic write, my friend.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/7/2024 6:27:00 AM

Thank a whole lot for reading and commenting, Mark. I know you've been busy lately.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/5/2024 11:09:00 PM

Beautifully written Lin, you compose romantic verse so well. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 7/7/2024 6:26:00 AM

Hi, Tom and thank you very much for liking this one.

Karen Jones

Date: 7/5/2024 12:22:00 PM

Wow Lin! This delightful piece captured my attention from beginning verses till the end!!It is wonderfully passionate and beautiful! Thanks for sharing with us!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/7/2024 6:25:00 AM

Hi, Karen and thanks so much for giving this one your attention. Your comments are always welcome.