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On Love's Suicide

Today you broke me; and left my heart bleeding on, love's suicide. The pain, stabs your sword right through this scare: so deep, seeping out. Only questions our faith of true meaning..... Was it really there in the first place? I ask; Or was I only dreaming In the first degree, can you bare these tear drops on your guitar to wipe them clean. Come back to me, don't leave me here drunk on love's suicide I beg of you... My love!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/16/2012 6:25:00 AM
very strong title, i love how u express the pain and willingness to stil get back to that love. This is wonderful.*smiles* RON
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/16/2012 8:36:00 AM
"Thank You RoNny, yes it indeed was strong and painful.. was having a ruff day! But relief is all about wrighting right? Thanks for the comment...
Date: 6/15/2012 8:40:00 AM
praying for your happiness to return,nice write Carma
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/15/2012 8:46:00 AM
"thank you Richard, for the warm prayer...xoxo!!! Carma"
Date: 6/14/2012 11:28:00 PM
Very intense write Carma...love it!!
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/15/2012 1:47:00 AM
"Thank You Sweetheart Was Feeling Kinda Down Today, But I'm Better Now..Love Carma" :)
Date: 6/14/2012 9:26:00 PM
Give praise to the Creator. You left me tearing. Be blessed and peace be with you.
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/14/2012 10:09:00 PM
Thank you for the praises, I always try to keep my head held high.... God bless you! Carma
Date: 6/14/2012 9:24:00 PM
this is really good, i feel like this often, carma, and beautiful name, by the way! anyways, love it! thanks for sharing, =Juli-Michelle
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/14/2012 10:12:00 PM
Thank You Julie-Michelle, and for the comment on my name, but it feels sometimes as if I'm cursed lol.... Glad you enjoyed it! Carma

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