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"Looking back at the Earth, I can't really describe how beautiful it is from 300 miles up. Looking down, you can tell it's a planet. The sky is black. There's just a thin blue ribbon, what we see as blue sky on Earth. You realize how small it is and how fragile the planet is." - Astronaut Mike Good
All we are seeing around us is
utter and absolute
Blackness
The image seared into our brains is
Desolation
a blanket of the densest darkest threads
through which
no light can seem to enter is
above us
and
below us
At last in the vast expanse of nothingness
just a thin ribbon of blue sublime and beautiful comes into view
Our collective pulse quickens
Faint light can be seen!
The phrase Hope springs eternal is in my mind.
Our gloom is fading,
for our home planet has already endured long past the point
when God first said
Let there be light
Written May 11, 2016
for the "Just a Thin Blue Ribbon" Poetry contest of Rita A. Simmonds.
Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2016
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