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On Bedlam

He sat on the bed of roses They were spread in a confused manner Certainly intrepid in their graciousness Their petals waning at their edges And there alone, he sank into another She was distant in his dream He was imagining all the need, the drunkness Like he had had a dose of laudanum Conspicuously poising itself on his solemn sorrow With the wit he had left and the sanity he could collect, He made for the drawer Collected a collage of her dresses And marred together with the roses The red, the yellow, the white, Her best colors made him another cushy bed Kitumba

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Date: 12/16/2015 4:10:00 AM
Kitumba, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/15/2015 10:21:00 PM
An excellent poem. A 7. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 12/15/2015 3:17:00 PM
Hi Kitumba, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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Date: 12/15/2015 2:55:00 PM
Kitumba, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Kitumba Johnmary
Date: 12/16/2015 4:37:00 AM
Thanks. Looking forward to know you too

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