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On An Afternoon Like This

On an afternoon like this Dark clouds cry this weathered storm while we stroll neath angry skies Chilly takes the place of warm, dampened skin and shivered sighs When we find here in this place as we share a moistened kiss Moments we can not replace on an afternoon like this So I say just let it flow raindrops every where I see For our love will always glow, like the sun eternally

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/16/2017 4:12:00 PM

Hi Chris!:)Very beautifully written romantic, sweet and passionate love poem Chris!:)Very enchanting! I truly enjoyed reading this one again. A 7 + ! A fav too.And thank you so much again for sharing!:) For sure I'll be back n' continue reading more of your very beautiful poems, my friend Chris:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:)) D.

Chris Green
Date: 6/16/2017 5:19:00 PM

Thank you, I am so thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Vivien Wade

Date: 6/2/2017 1:46:00 AM

A lovely poem. Says so much in just a few lines. Vivien Wade

Chris Green
Date: 6/16/2017 5:20:00 PM

Thank you so much Vivien. Sorry I missed this comment.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/31/2017 7:39:00 AM

Love transcends all and can give warmth to any place . . . thanks for sharing this gorgeous piece:) Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 5/31/2017 9:17:00 AM

Thank you so very much Anne Marie. Your nice comments are always a sunny day to me.

Darren White

Date: 5/31/2017 5:23:00 AM

Anywhere is good, any weather, any place, as long as love still lives. The music plays while I read this, non-existing music but it plays in my head. And I love this a lot

Chris Green
Date: 5/31/2017 9:16:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/31/2017 1:01:00 AM

Brings to mind the song 'Raindrops keep falling on my head', but you've got Love glowing like the sun, so who cares if the dark clouds cry now? Beautiful Chris, so enjoyed this.... Maria

Chris Green
Date: 5/31/2017 9:16:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your kind thoughts. It is a wonderful feeling being in love and finding each day sunny and bright regardless of the weather.

Becca Teagan

Date: 5/30/2017 11:36:00 PM

I love walking in the rain.... this is so romantic, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 5/31/2017 9:14:00 AM

Thank you so very much Becca. I always look forward to your visits.

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/30/2017 9:35:00 PM

aw, sounds like anywhere is perfect when you are warmed with each others love. Very nice Chris :) :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/31/2017 9:14:00 AM

It sure is Lenna. Thank you so much for all of your kindness my friend.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/30/2017 5:57:00 PM

I felt like it was really happening to me. Another beautiful love pome.

Chris Green
Date: 5/31/2017 9:08:00 AM

Thank you my friend. A poet can hear nothing better than someone felt his or her poem. I appreciate you.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/30/2017 4:23:00 PM

ah, glad to see a romantic and optimistic poem from you today, chris! this is lovely and i love the rhyme of storm and warm...

Chris Green
Date: 5/31/2017 9:04:00 AM

Thank you so very Ilene, yeah I know they got a little dark there, but the sun is shining bright once again. :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/30/2017 3:34:00 PM

Oh let it flow indeed :) So lovely, Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 5/31/2017 9:04:00 AM

Thank you so very much Akkina

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/30/2017 3:32:00 PM

Ahh..So loved this...Indeed a lit bit of love..a little bit of sunshine..and let it rain..The angry skies never felt so beautiful.You make me smile :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/31/2017 9:04:00 AM

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I am happy you found a little happiness in these angry skies.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/30/2017 3:16:00 PM

Excellent silver lining playbook poem, Chris. As Stevie Wonder said: you brought joy inside my tears. This illustrates this so very well. Wonderful poem. Love and joy, my friend.

Chris Green
Date: 5/31/2017 9:02:00 AM

Thanks so much Freddie and I loved that movie, not because I'm into love movies but because the running theme was about the Philadelphia Eagles and how their fans are...I am a big fan. I could see myself in each of those characters, especially Deniro. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/30/2017 2:59:00 PM

What a beautiful poem to read this rainy afternoon Chris! Thanks for sharing :)