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On a Mossy Stone

. . . father does not see my mournful sad tears, that fall on a mossy stone; oh my broken heart bleeds . . . ____________________________ March 1, 2015 Poetry/Kimo/on a mossy stone Copyright Protected, ID 03-645-277-01 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, Any Poem #31, sponsor, A Poet Destroyer Eighth Place

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Date: 4/23/2016 2:07:00 AM
quickly to soupmail.
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Date: 7/30/2015 12:48:00 AM
Such a beauty BW! Congrats on ur wonderful winning poem !
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Date: 7/28/2015 9:08:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/28/2015 6:19:00 PM
BW, congratulations on your awesome win :-)Alexis
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Date: 7/28/2015 1:22:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held This Year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very old contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "EXCUSE ME" if you'd like or have the time. --I'm glad to be back on the wild side of Poetry Soup hosting, new contest. Yours Truly!!! *LINDA*
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Date: 3/23/2015 10:18:00 AM
Too many of your loved ones have passed [sigh] I'm afraid we are of an age. As soon as its spring maybe go to a park and watch the babies? Light & Love always
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Date: 3/7/2015 9:40:00 AM
The descriptive wording and the great imagery bring this piece to life. Well done. Emile. #7
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Date: 3/3/2015 3:32:00 PM
Good one for the contest ..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by. Sara
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Date: 3/1/2015 6:09:00 PM
A good entry and a tearful poem. I never know what PD will like. I hope she likes mine!!!
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Date: 3/1/2015 9:05:00 AM
Nice kimo ! Keep writing my friend. Light & Love
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Date: 2/28/2015 2:51:00 PM
heart wrenchingly lovely Connie great pen hugs 7
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Date: 2/28/2015 2:51:00 PM
heart wrenchingly lovely Connie great pen hugs 7
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Date: 2/28/2015 9:45:00 AM
How I can relate to this write Broken Wings! A 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/28/2015 9:03:00 AM
It is good that this poem has a second chance at glory.
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