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On a Frozen Lake

geese sit on the edge of a frozen lake

   bills tucked 'neath ruffled feathers

      snowflakes fall from grey skies








~~~ 07/02/2013~~~

Copyright © Francine Roberts | Year Posted 2013

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Joann Grisetti Date: 2/17/2013 12:42:00 PM The picture of cold. Lovely words you have used here. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/17/2013 5:47:00 AM Beautiful imagery in this Kimo.Congrats Francine on your win! Login to Reply

Mehnaz Veetil Date: 2/17/2013 2:45:00 AM congratulations on this great write.... Login to Reply

Debra Squyres Date: 2/16/2013 9:54:00 AM Excellent !! I see the geese, the sky...I feel the cold. Congrats on your win !! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/16/2013 4:45:00 AM Very descriptive of a winter scene..Congrats on your winning work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/15/2013 7:31:00 PM Francine.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/15/2013 4:09:00 PM I just knew this one would be high. GREAT poem and BIG congrats, Francine. Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 2/15/2013 3:40:00 PM You have painted a lovely winter scene, Francine! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/15/2013 3:14:00 PM Francine congrats on your win. Connie Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 2/15/2013 12:00:00 PM We've got plenty of geese here in New Jersey. Your nice write appears as if you are describing some of our local scenery. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/9/2013 11:15:00 AM what a great picture you created for the frozen landscape kimo contest. ME LIKES. Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 2/8/2013 5:40:00 PM Wonderful Login to Reply

Mehnaz Veetil Date: 2/7/2013 9:02:00 PM picture perfect.... well done Francine.. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/7/2013 8:36:00 PM Hi Francine, i enjoyed the vivid image the geese snuggling within their own wings. A very chilly and beautiful picture that makes nature stand still...always~ LINDA Login to Reply