On a Frozen Lake

geese sit on the edge of a frozen lake

   bills tucked 'neath ruffled feathers

      snowflakes fall from grey skies








~~~ 07/02/2013~~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Grisetti Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 12:42 PM
The picture of cold. Lovely words you have used here.
Poet Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 5:47 AM
Beautiful imagery in this Kimo.Congrats Francine on your win!
Veetil Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:45 AM
congratulations on this great write....
Squyres Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 9:54 AM
Excellent !! I see the geese, the sky...I feel the cold. Congrats on your win !!
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 4:45 AM
Very descriptive of a winter scene..Congrats on your winning work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
A   Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 7:31 PM
Francine.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 4:09 PM
I just knew this one would be high. GREAT poem and BIG congrats, Francine.
Merryman Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 3:40 PM
You have painted a lovely winter scene, Francine! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 3:14 PM
Francine congrats on your win. Connie
Pettit Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 12:00 PM
We've got plenty of geese here in New Jersey. Your nice write appears as if you are describing some of our local scenery.
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 11:15 AM
what a great picture you created for the frozen landscape kimo contest. ME LIKES.
Jones Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 5:40 PM
Wonderful
Veetil Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 9:02 PM
picture perfect.... well done Francine..
A   Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Hi Francine, i enjoyed the vivid image the geese snuggling within their own wings. A very chilly and beautiful picture that makes nature stand still...always~ LINDA
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