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On a Frozen Lake

geese sit on the edge of a frozen lake bills tucked 'neath ruffled feathers snowflakes fall from grey skies ~~~ 07/02/2013~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/17/2013 12:42:00 PM
The picture of cold. Lovely words you have used here.
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Date: 2/17/2013 5:47:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in this Kimo.Congrats Francine on your win!
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Date: 2/17/2013 2:45:00 AM
congratulations on this great write....
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Date: 2/16/2013 9:54:00 AM
Excellent !! I see the geese, the sky...I feel the cold. Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 2/16/2013 4:45:00 AM
Very descriptive of a winter scene..Congrats on your winning work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/15/2013 7:31:00 PM
Francine.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD
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Date: 2/15/2013 4:09:00 PM
I just knew this one would be high. GREAT poem and BIG congrats, Francine.
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Date: 2/15/2013 3:40:00 PM
You have painted a lovely winter scene, Francine! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/15/2013 3:14:00 PM
Francine congrats on your win. Connie
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Date: 2/15/2013 12:00:00 PM
We've got plenty of geese here in New Jersey. Your nice write appears as if you are describing some of our local scenery.
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Date: 2/9/2013 11:15:00 AM
what a great picture you created for the frozen landscape kimo contest. ME LIKES.
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Date: 2/8/2013 5:40:00 PM
Wonderful
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Date: 2/7/2013 9:02:00 PM
picture perfect.... well done Francine..
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Date: 2/7/2013 8:36:00 PM
Hi Francine, i enjoyed the vivid image the geese snuggling within their own wings. A very chilly and beautiful picture that makes nature stand still...always~ LINDA
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