On a Bench

I was sitting on a bench, by the sunshine being drenched
When a strange situation took place
Someone sat next to me; from where he came I didn’t see
And I couldn’t get a good look at his face

Then he whispered in my ear, “Do you know why I am here”
And strangely, I thought that I might
I sensed his presence once before, standing in the bedroom door
When my father passed away in the night

I listened to a distant drum, knowing that my time had come
And asked if I could just bask a little longer
He said, “That beating is your heart, the journey we did start”
And I felt his grasp get a little stronger

They found me slumped on that bench and in my hand I had clenched
The pocket watch I inherited from Dad
Time means nothing more to me, now that I am history
Now my son has the watch we once had

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/5/2013 4:17:00 AM
Big congratulations Joe!! Well done. What a fabulous write and read! Deb
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Date: 3/30/2013 4:24:00 AM
Told you I loved it and so does everyone else....Seren
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Date: 3/29/2013 5:25:00 PM
Great winning work..Congrats on your first place win..Sara
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Date: 3/29/2013 4:47:00 PM
wow, such a sad one, joe! WELL DONE. a cleverly crafted poem for the bench contest.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/29/2013 9:10:00 AM
Great poem congrats
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Date: 3/29/2013 8:03:00 AM
Fantastic and awesome piece,Joe...Great job..Congrats on your super win in this contest..Kudos to you,pal...
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Date: 3/29/2013 6:17:00 AM
wow! a great write and deserved the 1st place. congrats!
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Date: 3/28/2013 10:10:00 PM
a nice winning poem..Pd
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Date: 3/28/2013 4:08:00 PM
Congratulations on this win Joe. Take care, Regards Richard
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Date: 3/28/2013 3:08:00 PM
Brilliant!
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Date: 3/28/2013 7:51:00 AM
Great write! One of my new favorites.
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Date: 3/28/2013 3:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joe xx
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Date: 3/27/2013 7:54:00 PM
what a story..! it would be great written as a short soty. Congrats on your first. BG
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Date: 3/27/2013 5:41:00 PM
congrats on a great win
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Date: 3/27/2013 4:46:00 PM
Joe your poem just gave me goose bumps...congrats...Donna
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Date: 3/27/2013 2:13:00 PM
Well done, Joe! Reminds me of an old Twilight Zone episode.
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Date: 3/27/2013 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your very creative poem and win, Joe. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/27/2013 12:14:00 PM
VERY creative poem, Joe! Congrats on such a well-deserved 1st place win!
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Date: 3/17/2013 7:40:00 AM
Joe what a wonderful and heartfelt poem you wrote. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/16/2013 2:33:00 AM
Loved it Joe well done ...Seren
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