On a Bench

I was sitting on a bench, by the sunshine being drenched
When a strange situation took place
Someone sat next to me; from where he came I didn’t see
And I couldn’t get a good look at his face

Then he whispered in my ear, “Do you know why I am here”
And strangely, I thought that I might
I sensed his presence once before, standing in the bedroom door
When my father passed away in the night

I listened to a distant drum, knowing that my time had come
And asked if I could just bask a little longer
He said, “That beating is your heart, the journey we did start”
And I felt his grasp get a little stronger

They found me slumped on that bench and in my hand I had clenched
The pocket watch I inherited from Dad
Time means nothing more to me, now that I am history
Now my son has the watch we once had
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Burch Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 4:17 AM
Big congratulations Joe!! Well done. What a fabulous write and read! Deb
Roberts Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 4:24 AM
Told you I loved it and so does everyone else....Seren
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 5:25 PM
Great winning work..Congrats on your first place win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 4:47 PM
wow, such a sad one, joe! WELL DONE. a cleverly crafted poem for the bench contest.Congrats on your win.
Sister Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 9:10 AM
Great poem congrats
Arowolo Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 8:03 AM
Fantastic and awesome piece,Joe...Great job..Congrats on your super win in this contest..Kudos to you,pal...
Minardi Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 6:17 AM
wow! a great write and deserved the 1st place. congrats!
A   Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 10:10 PM
a nice winning poem..Pd
Seal Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 4:08 PM
Congratulations on this win Joe. Take care, Regards Richard
Konos Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 3:08 PM
Brilliant!
Bellville Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 7:51 AM
Great write! One of my new favorites.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 3:40 AM
Congratulations on your win Joe xx
Gorelick Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 7:54 PM
what a story..! it would be great written as a short soty. Congrats on your first. BG
May Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 5:41 PM
congrats on a great win
Jones Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 4:46 PM
Joe your poem just gave me goose bumps...congrats...Donna
Jerden Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 2:13 PM
Well done, Joe! Reminds me of an old Twilight Zone episode.
Johnson Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations on your very creative poem and win, Joe. Love, Joyce
Ober Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 12:14 PM
VERY creative poem, Joe! Congrats on such a well-deserved 1st place win!
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 7:40 AM
Joe what a wonderful and heartfelt poem you wrote. Warm Smiles, Connie
Roberts Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 2:33 AM
Loved it Joe well done ...Seren
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