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Oliver, a Boy

My mother's name was Seraphine
A sadder child was never seen 
Her duty was to serve the table
Of newly widowed Mrs. Grable

Her husband Mr. Grable died
To keep the British gratified
For which the lady, born and bred
Was brought to stay with Master Ted

Their lineage was the House of Bean 
A family favored by the Queen
When epic wars left many dead
The House of Bean was spared instead

For serving well Her Majesty
The Beans were blessed with property
And one small subject, good and clean
The lowly servant, Seraphine

When Seraphine was just a child
Her Master Ted met Mr. Wilde
A gentleman from Derbyshire
In need of servant class for hire

In Derbyshire he kept a farm
A new estate with country charm
That came with dairy cows and sheep
And one large lake two fathoms deep

He lived in lonely solitude
Without a wife to share his food
The class that served so faithfully
Was not a fitting company

When Seraphine was strong and able
She dug the grave of Mrs. Grable
And thought about a different house
To serve within a different blouse

For Seraphine had seen the day
When Master Bean refused to pay
The twenty pounds he paid before
Although she labored even more

She knew the way to break his sway
Was leave his house without delay
In search of better work and food
And just a bit of gratitude

But Bean would always tell her no
Because he feared that she would go
And tell the queen most truthfully
About the time she worked for free

She thought about a running mate
Another maid to share her fate
But all the other maids were proud
To be among the servant crowd . . .

When all their work was duly done
And shadowlands replaced the sun
The manor maids were then excused
To crawl in beds where they recused

Though waifish girls of every type
Were thus inclined to sit and gripe
They quickly found that like before
The cheeky ones were shown the door

Now Seraphine, just might have stayed
But all the rest were duly paid
Who thus, redeemed, and paid at last
Did not object to be outclassed

For manor work was hard to find
And prostitution was the grind
That left you sick and often dead
But rarely meant you got ahead

The girls shared a laugh or two
As servant maids are prone to do
But sheer exhaustion proved to be 
The ending to their revelry

Though Seraphine could join the crew
Who went to bed and promptly too
She quietly topped off her sack
Without a thought of coming back

A dreamer on the kitchen crew
Was dreaming with a window view
When suddenly the breaking dawn
Betrayed the maiden on the lawn

The kitchen boy released a shout
That startled everyone about
And made the Manor Lady scream
And wake the Master from his dream

A bobby who was passing by
Was startled by their anguished cry
And hurried with a worried frown
To find the Master in his gown

The Master told a mournful story
That even sold the Morning Glory
And made the bobby blow his whistle
Enough to kill a bed of thistle

A 'Peeler' by the name of Cook
Approached his calling by the book
And made a vow to Master Bean 
To capture cunning Seraphine...

***

This intermission that we take
Is meant to help you stay awake
Through what I say and for the sake
Of everyone who needs a break...


	Continued in part 2 . . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/7/2020 1:18:00 PM
A very well metered story this is, Bryan! That was so funny , the intermission in the middle. When I started out writing, I had some poems that were two to more pages long and the intermission would have been a great idea! You said you are from BYU? I graduated years ago from there and now reside in PG. Soupmail me and tell me about yourself. I will check out one more poem of yours!
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Bryan Norton
Date: 6/7/2020 2:56:00 PM
Thank you for working your way through this mess. The intermission was probably your best starting and ending point. However, it is always fun to make a good rhyme, as you know. Best wishes!
Date: 6/6/2020 1:08:00 AM
This is a superb write, Bryan, in all the technical ways, yes, but more importantly for me, the way you weave a story like fine tapestry, and keep the imagination yearning - that is a critical tool, IMHO, and one you wield with dexterity. How it took this long for me to notice your work, I don't know, but I'll chalk it up to my failing attention span, lol. I shall be visiting your page again, as you seem to be, like me, highly enamored of metre and rhyme ... really great stuff - fave-ing! :o)
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Bryan Norton
Date: 6/6/2020 3:05:00 AM
Thank you, my friend. Eventually, I will get to Oliver. Best wishes!
Date: 6/5/2020 2:42:00 AM
Excellent Bryan - congratulations on your win! I loved this (and the intermission too!) :)
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Bryan Norton
Date: 6/5/2020 2:57:00 AM
Thank you. I just found out when I read your message. Guess I'll have to write some more now!
Date: 2/20/2020 11:31:00 AM
Brilliant Bryan, I loved it...
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Bryan Norton
Date: 2/21/2020 1:00:00 AM
Thank you very much, Charlie. By the way, you look exactly like my Captain Nate in Aye Aye Said the Captain.

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