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Old Tree

OLD TREE Tell of this marvelous acre The which surrounded by neighborhood Where stands the giant old tree No living soul can remember a time of sprouting The time long before neighborhood For all anyone knows the old tree has always been there Center of the mystic plot And the ground cover renews year by year In a green emerald density Here reside the burrowers, climbers, flyers, Chance residents of nature’s renewal Year after year those hungry come and go Come and go Now witness this confrontation – One fine black cat Eyes ablaze, quietly watching And a ground squirrel Peering down from half way up the old tree Trunk Chattering about who knows what, But cock sure the old tree is quite eternal, will always aid escape Three black crows at tree top taunt, screech down The drama plays out daily, Has done so for countless ages Then, in some celestial silence Should old sky reaching giant speak It would say, “I am here” Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/14/2016 9:14:00 PM
I love to read about trees Daver. They give us so much without taking anything. They are a real blessing here on earth. I enjoyed your poem so much. #7 ; )
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Date: 9/3/2015 1:54:00 AM
A well and an intriguing imagery within this write..... A noble and brilliant penned..........A.M.
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Date: 9/2/2015 10:41:00 PM
trees live a life of their own, from every kid that's tried climbing to every stolen kiss as hands interlock along the tree they've seen love laughter ... the most loveliest of songs sang by birds .... I truly enjoyed this one
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:34:00 AM
thanks for your wonderful comment today, Daver. Have a lovely week!! Again, I love this poem!
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Date: 9/1/2015 9:13:00 PM
If only trees could talk and tell us all they have seen... I really enjoyed this interesting poem, Daver. Very well penned!
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Date: 9/1/2015 3:21:00 PM
Top marks for this lovely poem, Dave. Old trees have that something special about them, and they are a fount of inspiration, as this poem shows! ~ All the best. // paul
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Date: 9/1/2015 8:30:00 AM
A well and beautiful write Justin, I love your subject and how you describe it...... Excellent write..........A.M.
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Date: 8/30/2015 9:14:00 PM
I am glad to be the first here to say Excellent poem, DAver!! And I hope many more will be here soon to see it. Thanks for your fun and always welcome comments today, my friend!
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