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In the attic- I found a dusty album, of great mama, going back from death to baptism. And I took a trip timeworn and so sweet to fathom, snap shots old, someone that loved had placed with wisdom; first, is a faint snap of a baby in Autumn, and then, black and white, bleached out, disappearing pictures, of great mama, going back from death to baptism; pose to pose, a story is told that still life C A P T U R E S. Here, is a little girl clutching a reluctant cat, and great mama as a young woman in a strange hat. A snap of family as in a garden they sat, and here you balance a bike as you stop to chat; I only recall you with a double chin and fat. All day, I looked at old snaps on thick black pages, and great mama as a young woman in a strange hat; and beneath a wedding trellis throwing K I S S E S. But one photo makes me pause- touches my heart, of six young men in a photo hand colored like art. These smiling faces soon to war will be torn apart, and on the back, their names in ink someone did chart. On a list of the war dead these men are part, neatly folded beside their photo to remind us; of six young men in a photo hand colored like art. Each photo within this album is a moment B R E A T H L E S S . Weeping, I hold the book of photographs to my heart . . . ______________________ November 3, 2017 Poetry/Rhyme/Old Photographs Copyright Protected, ID 17-9559-39-0 All Rights Reserved. Written for the contest, Rhyme Time II sponsor, Laura Loo First Place Rhyming checked on www.rhymer.com Pattern - aaaaabab, aaaaabab, aaaaababa

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Date: 11/26/2017 7:39:00 AM
An outstanding, but oh so sad poem, Constance. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/25/2017 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Broken Wings with your sad write of beautifully expressed melancholy.
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Date: 11/25/2017 2:09:00 PM
Nicely written... Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/25/2017 7:23:00 AM
you captured my heart sweet broken wings, thank you and congrats on top placement :)
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Date: 11/24/2017 8:20:00 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem. Excellent!
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Date: 11/23/2017 6:03:00 AM
I feel as though you handed me each photo as you invited me in with vivid description. A lovely read! Congratulations on your win, Constance! xx
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Date: 11/23/2017 1:15:00 AM
So full of sadness and you take us all there with you on this memories ride of melancholy, congrats on your 1st place win
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Date: 11/23/2017 12:08:00 AM
Congratulations, BW on your win with a fine poem. Albums are nostalgic taking the mind sweetly backward.
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Date: 11/22/2017 5:06:00 PM
a beautiful melancholy poem Constance:-):-) congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/22/2017 4:09:00 PM
Wonderfully haunting and melancholy write, Constance - loved it! Congrats on your win, dear friend! :-) <3
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Date: 11/4/2017 10:12:00 AM
We've all had similar melancholy experiences from such sad reminders, you've detailed this one very well BW, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 11/4/2017 6:02:00 AM
Wow, what a fabulous write my friend! Such sadness, and joy within each line! I loved the excellent nature of the pictures, the old tales the tell, I would have loved to have seen these pictures in life, and better yet, it would have been fascinating to have seen them alive within their time period! My grandparents have tons of picture that my grandfather had taken...he prided himself as an amateur photographer! He did quite well! It's so cool to see old pictues and the stories they tell! G work
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