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Sing it at an up-tempo pace.  You know the tune...

Old McDonald had a car Ha-ha hardy-har-har And in his car he had some coke Ho-ho, what a dumb bloke With a snort-snort here And a snort-snort there Here a snort, there a snort Everywhere a snort-snort Old McDonald snorted coke But the cop who was with him He took a long toke

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Date: 6/22/2019 6:01:00 PM
Entertaining material, Gershon, especially the end twist! To be fair (and on the safe side) the end line could be referring to both cannabis or tobacco. Regards // paul
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2019 10:42:00 PM
You never know, could even be a water hookah. (Sure.) :) gw
Date: 6/21/2019 7:22:00 PM
Free up my friend...let it out...I think I'll do the same myself...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2019 10:44:00 PM
Ha, ha. I can't even take a drop of alcohol, let alone go off doing cannabis... Freedom for me is sobriety... To each his own. :) gw
Date: 6/21/2019 4:50:00 PM
Oh, that last line quite unexpected, very daring of you!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/21/2019 5:10:00 PM
I think that perhaps you're spot on here, Michelle. For me this is, indeed, very daring... Thanks for pointing it out. Appreciated. :) gw

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