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Old Man In a Bin

There was an old man in a bin,
Intent upon drinking his gin,
And he started to shout,
As I hoisted him out,
And shot like a bullet back in.

For Andrea’s limerick contest

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Carol Eastman

Date: 8/27/2014 10:12:00 AM

You go Jack! Very enjoyable!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2014 10:31:00 PM

HI JACK, NICE SEEING YOU ON ANDREA'S WINNING LIST... Congratulations!!! LUV*LINDA

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2014 5:34:00 PM

Great limerick, Jack! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2014 4:11:00 PM

made me chuckle - well done Jack. Hugs Jan x

Seren Roberts

Date: 3/31/2014 2:59:00 AM

Congrats Jack ......Seren

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/30/2014 5:30:00 PM

Congrat's Jack. Maybe your next one can be about rehab. :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/30/2014 9:37:00 AM

Good one!!! Loved it.....hope there was some tonic in that bin!!

Roy Jerden

Date: 3/30/2014 7:01:00 AM

Well done, Jack! Congratulations on a top placement! Cheers, Roy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/30/2014 6:02:00 AM

It's Sunday and happy to enjoy the fun and humor. Congrats on the win, jack

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/30/2014 12:21:00 AM

Great limerick, Jack. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Darren Watson

Date: 3/29/2014 10:25:00 PM

Congratulations Jack , A fine and much deserved win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2014 9:23:00 PM

Awesome, Jack. You are SO good at these. Nearly got first place! Congrats.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/29/2014 1:06:00 PM

Dear Jack, your "gin" limerick gave me a big grin! Good luck in the contest, my friend, but stay off the "sauce." LOL Love, Carolyn

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/26/2014 5:55:00 PM

Lol, I so enjoyed this funny Tanka Jack. Nicely done - Connie

Deb Wilson

Date: 3/24/2014 9:51:00 AM

Oh how funny! I just love limericks like this...love,Deb

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/24/2014 12:03:00 AM

He had to have that drink. Good write that will get some consideration from Andrea.

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/23/2014 9:37:00 PM

Oh Jack, you have made me split my jeans I was laughing so hard! This is an awesome and wondrous poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious write here this evening! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/23/2014 7:18:00 PM

Love your limy's jack.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/23/2014 6:52:00 PM

Outstanding Jack.....Tim

Charlene Mccutcheon

Date: 3/23/2014 6:47:00 PM

Jack, I am particularly fond of limericks. You should have won a prize if you didn't. Limericks are not easy to write. I think this is a good one and funny.. Thank you for sharing your talent here too. Charlene