Old Leaves

OLD LEAVES


Heads bowed they sadly wait for slower death
than that of those entrenched in fear’s retreat
the edge of lifeless branches their defeat
life’s fluid oozing thickly from their veins,

stilled as red stain mimics beauty’s blush
the tyrant lashes coldly - weapons drawn,
striking with the venom of blind fury
intent on wiping out all future spawn.

So do the pacifists endure their fate
accepting - blow on blow - as no disgrace
believing in their hearts that they are free
to live where hate and violence have no place,

nor is the ice white steel the greater strength
in battles fought in time but not in length
for all must rest their weapons and seek peace
and in their darkest moments sadly weep

as memories forgotten fade to dust
the weapons and desires  fade to rust
in the senseless rise and setting of the sun
in the tents of fallen soldiers - empty guns.

Old leaves clinging to a truth once known
withering in the chaffing winds of change
tormented by the demons changing face
unable to accept sweet deaths embrace.


John G. Lawless
8/18/2014
For A. V. Giorgio
Structured verse – Iambic forms contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 5:26 AM
Nicely crafted poem, Congrats. John
Lawless Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Thanks again Dr. Mehta.
Johnson Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 1:52 AM
This is a great poem, John and I truly enjoyed reading it. It should have been at the top. Congratulations.
Lawless Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 9:11 AM
Oh, Joyce, tickle my ego with such high praise and I'll have to buy new hats. Thanks for stopping by with a comment, always appreciated.
Meier-Hans Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 9:07 PM
Congratulations John. I enjoyed reading your poem.
Lawless Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 9:11 AM
Thank you Brenda for reading and commenting.
Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Enjoyed reading your metered verse..Does it goes da, dum?..I have no idea..Ha!!! Ha!! Thanks for stopping by..Sara...Glad that you got a chuckle..
Lawless Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 9:10 AM
Hey, Sara, always good to catch up with you in the comments. Perhaps a poem comparing the intrinsic differences between poetic meter and parking meter.
Cohen Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 4:52 PM
Really good entry. This is great and well formatted.
Lawless Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 9:06 AM
Thanks Kurdt, I fight these forms and then submit, allowing the muse to tackle the formalities.
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