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Old Dog

There once was a very old, old dog Who'd lay by the fire of cracklin' logs Dreaming mighty dreams Of years gone by schemes As his legs moved chasing wild mean hogs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/17/2014 11:57:00 AM
lol, love this - yes, I love watching as dogs' legs move as they dream : )
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Date: 3/16/2014 10:07:00 PM
Aren't dogs funny when they dream? Mine just carry on so...great poem Sara..I enjoyed it...
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Date: 3/16/2014 1:59:00 AM
Sara, i love the limerick... thank you for the dog chasing dogs imagery..Linda
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Date: 3/15/2014 1:50:00 PM
Well at least he will be safe enough, I have heard them thar hawgs is wild indeed Sara enjoyed reading Joe..)
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Date: 3/14/2014 10:26:00 PM
Ha ha, this is awesome, this is such a terrific write my friend! Our dog is terrified of a crackling fire, I don't know why per se, but he is, he's a scarey dog, afraid of everything pretty much it seems like! But he gets used to things after awhile, but it takes some time! I really enjoyed reading this clever limerick, I hope that dog enjoys his dream as that is all he has left I'm sure as he's an old, old dog! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/14/2014 6:09:00 PM
Love dogs. I have a Beamish Boy, he slayed the Jabberwocky.
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Date: 3/14/2014 5:36:00 PM
ohh, our dog is getting grouchy... greeat, fun write, sara.. huggs
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Date: 3/14/2014 3:53:00 PM
Charming and warm as the fire burning before this lovely old dog! Hi Sara, I hope you are fine!
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