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OLD AND GREY


With a ring, I'm hoping to say
All my intent that came our way
I pray for God's grace
to rain on that place
where our wedding vows display

I want to send my guy a bouquet
to him my love I'll display
His cheeks powder flush
as touches play hush
These flow e'en we're old and grey
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O.E. Guillermo 
6:42 pm, April 29, 2015



Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/23/2016 10:47:00 PM
I like.....simple and serene!
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:29:00 AM
Sweet expressions from wonderful lines which are so liberal to disallow the message stay hidden. I love this poem and it is definitely a 7
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/12/2015 4:09:00 PM
thanks much... :)!
Date: 5/9/2015 1:40:00 PM
A lovely romantic double limerick! May it not be too long before we see that ring on your finger:) hugs // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2015 7:46:00 AM
thanks Paul..hugs back..:)
Date: 5/1/2015 5:11:00 PM
Wow...not only one but double limerick! A change into light poetry, Olive! And still you gentle touch shines through! Kim :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/3/2015 12:39:00 PM
Thank you Kim, it's a challenge writing Limericks, and I'm always keen to try, hugs // :) ~olive eloisa :D!
Date: 4/30/2015 3:06:00 PM
I can't write a decent limerick, worth it's own salt; much less a double one, but it's nice to know that someone can and fun to read.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/3/2015 12:37:00 PM
I've only just started trying them after reading James Fraser's Limericks. He's really good at writing them, :) ~olive eloisa :D!
Date: 4/29/2015 2:33:00 PM
so beautifully expressed, eloi... i wanted more doses of this fond musings!.. how are you?.. huggs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/12/2015 4:07:00 PM
thanks much..:) weeeee!hugs...
Date: 4/29/2015 1:09:00 PM
Love this double Limerick Olive. It's made me smile widely little one. Warm hugs//James xxxx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/30/2015 6:40:00 PM
Huge one James... =) winks and hugs.. =) thanks much!~olive eloisa
Date: 4/29/2015 10:04:00 AM
Your words play within our hearts and their magic comes alive. Emile.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/30/2015 6:38:00 PM
Emile thank you for dropping by and leaving your comment.. =')
Date: 4/29/2015 8:39:00 AM
- You are proficient in limerick Olive, I have posted a silly one :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/30/2015 6:37:00 PM
thank you Ana Lise..=) i just tried my pen on this... :) am glad you like it.. =')