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old we all talk about getting old put yourself in there shoe they get up just like you they the older don’t feel that way the body may not move as quick the mind still sharp with history we should spend more of our time in their company so much to learn how lucky they are to still be here so many pass away and never see a golden day so I say if you know someone close to you put on their shoe you will never know what you might learn it could save you a lot of pain listening to the knowledge train they are on top of the hill your still claiming if you are strong give them plenty before their gone

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Date: 4/9/2017 12:39:00 PM
- A lot of truth in this poem, Niall - Very well written - // Sun :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/9/2017 12:55:00 PM
Hi Sunshine , My shrink told me write poetry to help me express myself ,Ha ha am just getting started , thanks

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