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As time passes I count the dawn's glimmering glow and marvel at the rich color of each sunset where I have changed without notice the mirror never changes only my reflection grows older the glorious days of my full flower have ended leaving me a curled brown leaf in a stillness of thought one that could cause my eyes to pour upon my wrinkled skin as I drink from this cup of solitude and reflect on the joy I planted with the seeds, I'll leave, who in turn will bloom and leave their own fragrance though wrinkled and gray I have crossed the years from the time of my awakening to the moment of my understanding that life is to be shared and that we live in a universe far beyond our comprehension when I look at the night sky, I look at it with wonder as I try to understand a universe that appears timeless where the length of my years means nothing when I'm washed away by the tide of time leaving my shore barren and empty where all my hopes and dreams vanish like yesterday's dawn where everything I thought important will be cast asunder lost in the midst of time by a universe far greater than I These are the things you think about when you are old

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Date: 7/29/2023 3:23:00 AM
Frederic, I am sure they dont make mirrors they way they used to. Referring to your lines :" the mirror never changes only my reflection grows older" I am sure my mirror is past its use by date, as its giving a distorted image lately, showing lines on my face that weren't there before. Your poem is great.
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Date: 7/29/2023 12:40:00 AM
"life is to be shared and that we live in a universe far beyond our comprehension" - Great wisdom shared. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/28/2023 6:21:00 PM
Frederic, congrats on your 1st place win with this amazing reflective write! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/27/2023 6:32:00 PM
I think about how in the heck will I clip my toenails. Seriously though, this is awesome poetic contemplation
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Date: 7/27/2023 1:14:00 PM
- Yes, these are things we are thinking about as we grow older... (ripe apples fall to the ground...) For some reason this poem gave me a lump in my throat... - A lovely poem with your thoughts, Frederic - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/27/2023 4:50:00 PM
thank you, dear Anne, your kindness reflects your soul
Date: 7/27/2023 9:47:00 AM
Dear Frederic, the depth and breadth of your poem takes my breath away with its tender yet vibrant introspection and vivid poetic expression. Soulful in its solitude, rich in wisdom of one's realization of insignificance in the infinite scheme of time and space.. "my hopes and dreams will vanish like yesterday's dawn" - such a poetic reckoning! Your last line is dazzling in this superb poem, dear friend, dear poet. A fav! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/27/2023 11:31:00 AM
Susan dear friend, dear poet I am blessed you have returned and have taken the time to read my humble verse...my thoughts on being old are easy because being old allows me the freedom to wander about in my mind and ponder...

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