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Oh Wonder

Rivers flow daring imagination time turns down within the whispers falling way to misguided interpretation oh wonder, what have I found Desire deep sets in amongst the waning lush virginal forest overgrowth drips shallow breaths penetrate the hunger curious eyes captured caress the fight The laid out linen's getting softer with a thought of you hidden at my side sounds of the south leaning into the heartache oh wonder, what's one supposed to do Tender notes fold the mascara runs petals plucked one by one shelter what has to be done empty arms carry me home Promises blown into the midnight oh wonder ...

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Date: 9/25/2017 8:11:00 AM
Touching poem you wrote here x
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Date: 9/23/2017 1:19:00 PM
wonderfully erotic! :)
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Date: 9/23/2017 9:18:00 AM
Hi Tim beautiful flow and description so well penned my friend ::::))))))
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Date: 9/23/2017 3:03:00 AM
Wonderful poem my friend. Pun not intended btw...
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Date: 9/22/2017 4:06:00 PM
Very nicely penned Tim
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Date: 9/22/2017 3:01:00 PM
beautifully rendered and tugging the heartstrings...enjoyed this one, tim..huggs
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Date: 9/22/2017 1:12:00 PM
I'm blown away by your words Tim, very beautiful pen my friend:-) hugs janxx
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Date: 9/22/2017 12:18:00 PM
A beautiful brooding piece Tim, a wonderful read xomo
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Date: 9/22/2017 11:51:00 AM
beautiful thoughts expressed in this evocative poem. Very nice, Tim.
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