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Premiere Contest WinnerOh, To Repose

 
The trees have put on their emerald gowns, Oh, the lush dark green, the fresh lime and sage; And all the twittering, chirping song sounds, Of birds, hidden in a tree of old age. I put down my shopping bags and repose, Lovely, in the shade of a drooping branch; I take off my shoes and wiggle my toes, Dandelions float like an avalanche. The fresh perfume of lilac is drifting, It is heaven to linger in this place; The tranquility is so uplifting, It is just nice to slow down the pace. I could stay here forever with this tree, But, sadly my life is calling for me. _________________________ May 26, 2016 Poetry/Sonnet/Oh, To Repose Copyright Protected, ID 16- 7952-19-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted into the contest, Best Sonnet sponsor, Laura Loo First Place
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Jayasankar Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 2:01 AM
Ohh my.. What a LOVELY poem... what great imagery and photo.. I felt as if I went to that particular heavenly place on earth where the perfume of lilac is drifting... That is the power of GREAT poetry... My FAV... Hugs.. ~ Ani
La France Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 8:32 AM
Ani, thank you for visiting my old poem from 2016, it was a pleasure for me to read it again so thank you for taking me here. And thanks for the compliment on the poem and of course for the FAV, appreciate _Constance
Raven Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 8:11 PM
Hi Constance, congratulations on your 1st place in Laura's contest with this wonderful Sonnet. It just sings off the tongue and fills this reader with peace. This one has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Monday. hugs....Mike. XX
Hamilton Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Congrats Constance on your nice win! So serene, well done!
Roper Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 10:19 PM
Congratulations on your win.. wonderful imagery ...
Ashley Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 6:57 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings on your excellent first place win with your beautifully tranquil and uplifting poem..
Johnson Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 1:34 PM
My friend, this is such a lovely piece and so soothing to me. I love the 'green leaves' of the tree with the light of life shining through. Congrats.
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Funny how life gets in the way... Lovely poem. Congrats on your win, BW.
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 11:48 AM
Love your picture too. Can't believe I never saw this one of yours before!
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 11:47 AM
Gorgeous, my friend and congrats on a top spot!
Richards Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:54 AM
I have often been caught up in such a moment,......sometimes it is hard to leave a place like this when life is calling. Lovely poem, Constance. Congrats to you!
Scars Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:38 AM
absolutely stunning sweet lady. The imagery, rhyme and rhythm outstanding.beautifully expressed! thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Lindley Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 6:05 PM
WHAT A REFRESHING AND POSITIVE SONNET! truly a wonderful poem and two closing verses are simply tops! Super, super 7--added to my fav and what a great addition it is my friend!
Nau Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 12:35 AM
WONDERFUL...a 7! We have many big Golden Oaks and Live Oaks in our county and this reminded me of how delightful it is when they finally wake up!
Watt Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 11:30 PM
Wings, this is SO rich. I resonate with the thought that nature is there to slow us down. I love the first line, and the evocative "I take off my shoes and wiggle my toes / Dandelions float like an avalanche." Reminiscent of Frost's "Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening". Very lovely. This poem made my day!
Sillence Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Very nice! I like this alot!
Stebbings Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 2:30 PM
This lovely, Broken Wings. There is nothing like resting under a tree in the sunlight.
James Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 9:38 AM
Brilliant...loved it!
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:14 PM
James, oh I love that word brilliant, thank you for visiting !
Trifiatis Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 9:06 AM
Wonderful scenery painted expertly with words, dear, B. W.! A seven!
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Dem, thanks for the wonderful comment and for the seven !!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 5:49 AM
Lovely, lovely Constance! This is a winner for me! #7 I loved every line. Thank you for the inspiration my friend. ; )
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Connie, thanks so much for the lovely's and the 7, appreciate a lot ~
Gorelick Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:54 PM
A beauty....I can so relate to this one. I just want to sit under a tree and ...be...BG
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Barbara, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~
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