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The trees have put on their emerald gowns, Oh, the lush dark green, the fresh lime and sage; And all the twittering, chirping song sounds, Of birds, hidden in a tree of old age. I put down my shopping bags and repose, Lovely, in the shade of a drooping branch; I take off my shoes and wiggle my toes, Dandelions float like an avalanche. The fresh perfume of lilac is drifting, It is heaven to linger in this place; The tranquility is so uplifting, It is just nice to slow down the pace. I could stay here forever with this tree, But, sadly my life is calling for me. _________________________ May 26, 2016 Poetry/Sonnet/Oh, To Repose Copyright Protected, ID 16- 7952-19-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted into the contest, Best Sonnet sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 3/11/2021 2:01:00 AM
Ohh my.. What a LOVELY poem... what great imagery and photo.. I felt as if I went to that particular heavenly place on earth where the perfume of lilac is drifting... That is the power of GREAT poetry... My FAV... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2021 8:32:00 AM
Ani, thank you for visiting my old poem from 2016, it was a pleasure for me to read it again so thank you for taking me here. And thanks for the compliment on the poem and of course for the FAV, appreciate _Constance
Date: 3/4/2018 8:11:00 PM
Hi Constance, congratulations on your 1st place in Laura's contest with this wonderful Sonnet. It just sings off the tongue and fills this reader with peace. This one has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Monday. hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 3/4/2018 12:20:00 PM
Congrats Constance on your nice win! So serene, well done!
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Date: 3/3/2018 10:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.. wonderful imagery ...
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Date: 3/3/2018 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings on your excellent first place win with your beautifully tranquil and uplifting poem..
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Date: 3/3/2018 1:34:00 PM
My friend, this is such a lovely piece and so soothing to me. I love the 'green leaves' of the tree with the light of life shining through. Congrats.
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Date: 3/3/2018 12:07:00 PM
Funny how life gets in the way... Lovely poem. Congrats on your win, BW.
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Date: 3/3/2018 11:48:00 AM
Love your picture too. Can't believe I never saw this one of yours before!
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Date: 3/3/2018 11:47:00 AM
Gorgeous, my friend and congrats on a top spot!
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:54:00 AM
I have often been caught up in such a moment,......sometimes it is hard to leave a place like this when life is calling. Lovely poem, Constance. Congrats to you!
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:38:00 AM
absolutely stunning sweet lady. The imagery, rhyme and rhythm outstanding.beautifully expressed! thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 6/9/2016 6:05:00 PM
WHAT A REFRESHING AND POSITIVE SONNET! truly a wonderful poem and two closing verses are simply tops! Super, super 7--added to my fav and what a great addition it is my friend!
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Date: 5/29/2016 12:35:00 AM
WONDERFUL...a 7! We have many big Golden Oaks and Live Oaks in our county and this reminded me of how delightful it is when they finally wake up!
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Date: 5/28/2016 11:30:00 PM
Wings, this is SO rich. I resonate with the thought that nature is there to slow us down. I love the first line, and the evocative "I take off my shoes and wiggle my toes / Dandelions float like an avalanche." Reminiscent of Frost's "Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening". Very lovely. This poem made my day!
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Date: 5/28/2016 3:35:00 PM
Very nice! I like this alot!
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Date: 5/28/2016 2:30:00 PM
This lovely, Broken Wings. There is nothing like resting under a tree in the sunlight.
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Date: 5/28/2016 9:38:00 AM
Brilliant...loved it!
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Date: 5/28/2016 12:14:00 PM
James, oh I love that word brilliant, thank you for visiting !
Date: 5/27/2016 9:06:00 AM
Wonderful scenery painted expertly with words, dear, B. W.! A seven!
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Date: 5/28/2016 12:15:00 PM
Dem, thanks for the wonderful comment and for the seven !!
Date: 5/27/2016 5:49:00 AM
Lovely, lovely Constance! This is a winner for me! #7 I loved every line. Thank you for the inspiration my friend. ; )
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Date: 5/28/2016 12:16:00 PM
Connie, thanks so much for the lovely's and the 7, appreciate a lot ~
Date: 5/26/2016 8:54:00 PM
A beauty....I can so relate to this one. I just want to sit under a tree and ...be...BG
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Date: 5/28/2016 12:17:00 PM
Barbara, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~

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