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''Oh the Memories, Memories''

My thoughts let go of a thousand memories, Like faces, dates, times and places; Yet, I can recall each and every detail, On the day of your funeral. (. . .and my mind takes me back through the tattered pages of my life to a place of warmth, security and love . . . . .) O the grieving . . . In the middle of a snow storm I followed, And the wind blew back my long hair; As we meandered down a winding cold path, The wild wind paused in the trees. ( . . O, my mother's kitchen with it's big cupboards and old stove and a blue teapot on the kitchen table and grandma telling me of life, of people in the family long dead . . . ) O the weeping. . . Snowflakes fell on me from the tangled branches, Falling like crying tears cascading down; I am lost and moaning in this forever, ever memory, And now the snow drifts in the cemetery. (. . . and it was at that same table that I read my first poems while sipping tea and father coming in from shovelling snow in winter all bundled up . . . ) O the sadness . . . A headstone is buried deep in the pure white, And but one engraved word is revealed; In this pristine cold, dead winter wonderland, Only one word can be seen, MOTHER, Hidden beneath the snow. (. . . a warm fireplace waiting within then at night in an attic room this little girl was tucked in with forever loving hands, hugs and kisses . . .) O the lamenting . . . I will treasure your arms last embrace, mother, till this heart stops beating . . . __________________________________ February 19, 2015 Poetry/Free Verse/''oh the memories, memories'' Copyright Protected, ID 02-641-987-19 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, Memories sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron, Judged 03/2015 Second Place

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Date: 6/27/2016 8:30:00 PM
Broken, lovely win. SKAT
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Date: 5/7/2016 11:09:00 AM
A ddep emotional piece.... Congrats for your top placement BW!! ;-)
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Date: 5/7/2016 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations BW:) Touching memories:)
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Date: 5/6/2016 2:30:00 PM
Broken Wings, a very moving poem and I really was touched by this..congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2016 6:41:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the nice comment and congrats ~
Date: 5/6/2016 2:25:00 PM
Straight from teh heart,congratulations BW!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2016 6:41:00 PM
Sara, thanks so much for visiting with congratulations ~
Date: 5/6/2016 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on the placement of the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2016 6:42:00 PM
Nayda, thanks so much for another wonderful contest and my placement ~
Date: 8/20/2015 12:59:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome poem n win Broken! Quite an emotive one!
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Date: 8/19/2015 1:52:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations.... SKAT
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Date: 4/18/2015 6:43:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your fine win. LINDA
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Date: 4/16/2015 8:20:00 PM
I remember reading this revised poem, and thinking it was so stunning, fitting the pieces perfectly. If not for a few details on the contest rules....and I know how hard you worked to choose just the right two poems. I am sure it was a difficult decision for Craig. Just know it is a beautiful mix !!
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Date: 4/16/2015 5:21:00 PM
Oh, BW, such a sad intermingle of your poems that touched my heart so deeply. I am so pleased to see it on the winner's list. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/16/2015 4:56:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/29/2015 9:36:00 AM
Deep and moving..nice write....(good poetry doesn't need a photograph) Thanks..Peter
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Date: 2/23/2015 12:39:00 PM
A match made in heaven, both poems flow and complement and off set each other well. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/23/2015 7:08:00 AM
The depth of the emotion here is intense. I feel drawn into your world. Exceptional!
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Date: 2/22/2015 8:02:00 PM
You need to write and post again dear one! I am hungry for your words. Love and light.
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Date: 2/21/2015 2:17:00 AM
you know you are a real inspiration to me. make me want to write meaningful emotional writes instead of poems about crazy people and the crazy things they do. you have a marvelous talent thanks for being awesome
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Date: 2/19/2015 7:24:00 PM
The two poems work together to bring life to memories . . . even the pain of lost love is tender . . . our memories, though painful at times, will harden into jewels we will carry for a life time. Loved your poem.
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Date: 2/19/2015 2:25:00 PM
WOW! After reading this I felt the same way after I read Simon & Garfunkel's piece which never fails to absorb me completely! The beauty, the imagery, the emotions that your piece evokes - just captivatingly brilliant! I love it! Pandita.
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Date: 2/19/2015 1:05:00 PM
Oh Broken wings this is such a moving poem with such wonderful imagery - :-) Hugs Jan and good luck in the contest - this will fly! Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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