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Oh Sadness

Alas, t'would mean the words would weep Alone in unconstructed phrase Hanging fruit ne'er to be picked Nor fall to seed again. No swords succumb in verbal joust To plow shares love of peace No flower passed to maiden fair To adorn the flax of wind blown hair. No Mariners to tell their tale Of thirsting decks sun bleached No fully clothed, yet naked kings No twisted word that laughs, yet stings. As rainbows weep and shadows flee Sweet words lay fallow in the fields Pen-less poets hide from sight Surrendering their shields. 1/22/2020 What if there were no poets

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Date: 5/2/2020 11:59:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this sad but beautiful poem. We all need to be reminded at times the wonderful gifts that we have been given should be cherished not abused. And if things are abused for long enough they die...
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Date: 1/22/2020 9:41:00 PM
Wow. A winner for me. Superb pening. xomo
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Date: 1/22/2020 4:46:00 PM
What a wonderful comparison of "hanging fruit ne're to be picked" to poetry left unwritten. Many seeds have been grown by poets that were planted in the thoughts of others to create new crops, but fallow would be the fields if not for poets. Your list of analogies are perfect.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/25/2020 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Lin, your interest and insight is always welcome.
Date: 1/22/2020 4:43:00 PM
G'day John … you portrayed a sad world that could be in your poetic verse, but thankfully the poets are surviving - thanks John - Lindsay
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John Lawless
Date: 1/25/2020 1:31:00 PM
Yes it seems that the legacy of the poet warriors is being carried forward. Now is we could just stop fighting among ourselves. Thanks for stopping by to comment.

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