Premiere Contest WinnerOh, My Withered Dreams

 
      . . . I am lost in a sea of memories
that scar the roadmap of my bleeding soul;
my words-    the highway to my deep pain.
I follow a labyrinth of passages and corridors
              curved and contrived-      I am a child praying.
Oh, my withered dreams, my hopes, my aspirations!
Why do I dreg up my past sorrows
that come drifting like a dark death melody . . .
my grief comes unbidden to stain my years-
my tears hang from dripping branches in a
               . . . graveyard where tombs stand in rows and rows.   
Oh-    grass grows greener in a graveyard,
and the happy hummingbirds hover in heavenly harmony
and red roses decay-   the wind a violin . . .
(Blood seeps from the dagger in my heart!)
Barefoot, ragged, hair tangled-    I am a girl
lost in the sad wail of violin winds;
                . . .  life stretches before me like a long road.
I am sick of all the sorrow-    decay,
I want days as clear as sparkling wine,
to live a life of peace and serenity;
      days brilliant blue and nights full of stars,
            picture perfect, instead of this vast empty place . . . 
Oh, bitter this life-    yet a fire burns
                inside of me and soon  it will explode . . . 

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February 13, 2017

Poetry/Free Verse/Oh, My Withered Dreams
Copyright Protected, ID 02- 875-889-13
All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France

Submitted to the Standard contest, Best Free Verse This Year,
sponsor, John Hamilton, Judged 2017

Second Place
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For the contest,  Any Free Verse 200 Words or Less
Sponsor, Laura Loo Judged 

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 12:49 PM
Congratulations, Broken Wings, on your win… ~*
Singh Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 8:57 AM
Dark and engrossing! Congrats !
Kimathi Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Greetings, BW!! Congrats for your well, deserved second placement with this brilliant piece!!! ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 6:43 PM
Beautiful poem AND placement, Constance. A wow one! Congrats
Hamilton Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 12:51 PM
Beautifully written Constance, excellent word choices congrats on your 2nd place win!
Smith Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 11:21 AM
So very well done Constance, congratulations...
Inman Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:17 AM
This is wonderful BW. "I follow a labyrinth of passages and corridors curved and contrived-", I love this line.
Capitano Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 7:11 AM
Beautifully done Constance, love the sadness in the "violin winds". Congrats on this wonderful win.
Daniel Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 4:20 AM
An amazing write, Constance, that showcases your brilliance:) ''my tears hang from dripping branches" - I loved that painful expression :) a 7:) congratulations:)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 9:05 PM
I love your poems, Constance...so poignant yet beautiful and hopeful too. This genius poem is no exception! Congrats on your well deserved first place win...hugs, Rhonda
La France Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 11:02 AM
Rhonda thanks for the nice comment and congratulations ~
Leiser Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 2:04 PM
Such deep sadness and sorrow so beautifully expressed in your excellent poetry, Constance. Congrats on your win :)
La France Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 11:03 AM
Laura Thank you for the lovely praise and congrats
Lawless Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 10:19 AM
..."yet a fire burns inside of me and soon it will explode..." BW I think that "fire" finds its flames within you and scorches the paper with explosions of poetic catharsis. An exemplary write this left me stunned in my chair. Congrats on the well deserved top spot in the contest.
La France Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 11:09 AM
John Thanks for that amazing comment and congratulations
Warrior Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 9:51 AM
A not so happy violintine to you too Wings...as usual...dark, dark, and dark...I love it...congrats!!!...god bless...^WW^
La France Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 11:10 AM
Winged thanks for the congratulations. Well you know me dark is what I do
Scars Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 9:29 AM
oh my word- such beauty held in these verses Broken Wings- I got teary eyed towards the middle...awesome poem...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
La France Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 11:14 AM
Laura Thank you for the forever inspiration to create my poems and thanks for my awesome placement
Bennett Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 6:20 PM
Deep and dark and stunning !! ~~Jeanie~~
La France Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 1:12 PM
Jeanie, thank you for the compliment
Parker Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 5:22 PM
sorrow is born in a moment of pain then stays like a shadow revealing itself whenever the heart seeks the lonely spaces where memories hide...your poem took me to that lonely space
La France Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 10:27 AM
Frederic Thanks for seeing into my lonely soul
Green Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 4:58 PM
Very deep and hauntingly dark my friend. Your poetry is always so filled with such imagery and incredible descriptive phrasing that paints scene on the minds of your readers, this one is painted in dark muted tones but still a masterpiece of poetic emotions.
La France Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 10:25 AM
Chris thanks for the amazing compliment, oh yes I do tend to write dark
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