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Oh My Love

oh, my love, what lull comfort I find shove clouds behind catch a brief glimpse of you above. your face etched layers. I dream of dawn yet, lest forget till earth and sky fret. balmy rhythm reflecting soul breathes flaunting echo 7/12/2020 Edward Ibeh invented poem form, Yalto: Line 1 to 15: 3,-4-2,-4-5-3-2-3-2-3-3-5-6-1-5 syllables. Strand Completely New(9) Any Form Any Theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 8/8/2020 4:59:00 AM
A beautifully rendered Yalto, Eve:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/8/2020 7:12:00 AM
I do like Using your form it makes it easier and more to the point, Edward. Thank you so much for your congratulations and also for the form you’ve created. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/16/2020 10:45:00 PM
So sad, Eve - a melacholy Yalto. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/15/2020 11:54:00 PM
Eve, this is so lovely with a dynamite format too. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 7/14/2020 10:55:00 AM
Eve this was so beautiful!;) congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 7/13/2020 7:02:00 AM
A symphony of verses exulting lovedearest, Eve. Beautifully done! Hugs
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Date: 7/13/2020 6:42:00 AM
It is fun to wrote Yaltos! Nice
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Date: 7/13/2020 5:21:00 AM
Lovely writing, my friend. God bless you with a win :)
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Date: 7/13/2020 3:53:00 AM
A quite forlorn piece; in all its brevity it still captures a real depth of mood. Great poem, Eve.
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Date: 7/13/2020 1:05:00 AM
A brilliant poem, Eve:) magical words so beautifully woven:)
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Date: 7/12/2020 8:56:00 PM
Eve, you have penned a sadly beautiful Yalto poem, best of luck in the contest _Constance
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Date: 7/12/2020 8:33:00 PM
Delicate and pretty Eve. Your words are always beautiful.
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