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Oh Muse Wilt Thou Be Replaced Oh sweet Muse once your unrivalled reign flowed rich with a poet’s theme. Now in digital glow subpoenaing your dream Alas cold circuits assert their own gleam, Oh Digital Medusa, circuit’s fine as hair How did you lure the Muse into your skilful snare? In your silent hum through dexterous scripts? In the crystalline charm of your silicone chips? What sway does your simulation wear? Singing soullessly yet beyond compare? Torn between the eons of yesteryear and hi-tech might Should we dreamily embrace what sets senses alight? Disregard the great Bards as they stir in their graves? Throw to the flame both fiction and fame? Discount Elliot’s eyes from the heavenly skies? While Keats curses what gave rise to flight That burns brightly by day ` Burns brighter by night Oh Medusa, circuit’s fine as hair, Your prisoner release from your silent snare. She who has sipped from Tennyson’s cup Through Poe’s eerie abyss — where nightmares sup. Bathed in Shakespeare’s tragic tears of stain. Lamented with The Nightingale in Keats’s refrain. She who has soared on Shelly’s genius blaze And emanated Plath’s curse of fame. Medusa you might mock the reign you so blatantly steal Yet the Poets aches reveal in raw vulnerability appeal Alive in ink no circuitry codes could feel For art is more than just pain in a poet’s scream It’s a Hallowed Hook at The Heavenly Seam
Maria Williams© Victor Hugo once said, “No force on earth can stop an idea whose time has come.” And indeed, the rise of AI is one of those unstoppable forces. Yet, while it may assist, mimic, and even inspire, there are realms it cannot truly enter—like the raw vulnerability of poetry, the soul of a song, or the emotion that bleeds through a painter’s brush. These arts are born from lived experience, from aching hearts and dreaming minds. Still, there’s joy to be found in what AI can offer—a spark, a tool, a playful collaborator. The key is to use it without losing ourselves in it. To remember that the soul of true art still resides in human hands—and always will. Point to Ponder– it is Human Intelligence that built it , a result of the best Human minds – so tongue in cheek – should it be called Artificial Intelligence.

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Date: 7/24/2025 8:22:00 AM
The devil longs to strip all the gifts God gives us. To numbify our brains. To make us aimless and idle or to enslave us. Be gone in Jesus mighty name. Real poets, dreamers of dreams, musers, the playful, the thoughtful, the honest will and must keep writing! Hugs a million ~ Kim
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/24/2025 12:43:00 PM
Good comment Kim!
Date: 7/24/2025 8:05:00 AM
This is very creative. Individual poetry is of mixed with AI. Still I like how you mention the many bards that are famous. Great poem. Hope all is well at your home. Heard you have many storms.
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Date: 7/23/2025 8:07:00 PM
' Oh Digital Medusa, how did you lure the Muse into your skillful snare? ' This goes with your point to ponder. It is because of human intelligence. While the advances in technology is useful and helpful in many ways, it's making humans lazy. Etc. Sad, indeed. Your thoughts are deep and powerful, Maria. Hugs, Brandy
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Maria Williams
Date: 7/24/2025 6:23:00 AM
Although I agree, Brandy, I sadly feel it's here to stay. I was pretty surprised when we went to a school open day a month ago; the children in one class were on computers generating images on Canva. Well, it goes without saying that the schools are encouraging it, so who are we to stop it? Even the detectors can't be trusted; they classify a poem as AI-generated, then offer to humanise it. Sorry to be a downer. Thanks for stopping by my sweet friend..Hugs
Date: 7/23/2025 4:03:00 PM
your poem is unique in its approach to the entwining and interfacing of AI and technology with the art of poetry. It's written in your own beautiful and compassionate style. Love your creativity and poetic style, hugs, Sara
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Maria Williams
Date: 7/24/2025 6:25:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear Sara. So glad you liked it my friend. I appreciate you stopping by...Hugs
Date: 7/23/2025 8:51:00 AM
Awesomely creative tongue in cheek look at the rise of AI and the confusion and concern over its place in the arts. We live in a different world than Shakespeare, as he lived in a different world than Solomon. There's not much that can be done except to stay true to ourselves and hope true art survives.
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Maria Williams
Date: 7/24/2025 6:26:00 AM
So well put, Tommy,thats all we can do, stay true to ourselves, keep our Soul element in our arts always. I predict that there will come a time when everyone will be so sick of it, and then there will be a massive drive back to raw and natural again. Thanks for stopping by, my friend, appreciate it as always...Hugs.

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