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Oh, Go Away Yesterday

When love forsaken pierces my coarse sigh The hymns of willow leaves speak of goodbye; As the coming dusk hauls stars, I reply-- ‘OH, go away, yesterday.’ Breathless, this mid-life grows dreary, so old While photographs hang of stories untold Reflecting waxed candles filled with times’ mould OH, go away, yesterday. With hope to reach destiny bold, I fight... To embrace the pureness of morns, its delight Invoking fate a most wondrous act of rite OH, go away, yesterday. And sullen winds ruffle, a curtain call That my raw emotions, lonesome, befall On prayers not granted by seasons that crawl OH, go away, yesterday. For Broken Wings' Rhyme And Refrain Contest 5/13/2018

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Date: 6/2/2018 5:57:00 PM
Lovely, nette. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 5/15/2018 7:22:00 PM
Forlorn and lonely but beautiful just the same.
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Date: 5/15/2018 2:16:00 PM
Nette, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this beautifully sad poem, I love want you did with Oh, go away yesterday, well done ~
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Date: 5/15/2018 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your great win.
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Date: 5/14/2018 8:48:00 PM
The willow weeps for lost love...Congrats on a fine win Nette..
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Date: 5/14/2018 2:40:00 PM
Compelling and emotional. Congratulations on your win. Well done.
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Date: 5/13/2018 12:25:00 PM
- A new day is coming, Nette - A beautiful and touching writing - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/13/2018 12:03:00 PM
Intricately spun in a veil of melancholia. Your images come together to create s ' sullen' hymn!
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Date: 5/13/2018 11:55:00 AM
It's not so easy to say goodbye to yesterday...All the best nette
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Date: 5/13/2018 11:28:00 AM
As beautiful and talented as you are, I am certain your loneliness is but a pause to catch your breath. Beautifully sad, nette. Happy Mother's Day even though I know you are not a mom...yet:)
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Date: 5/13/2018 7:45:00 AM
So well written Nette! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 5/13/2018 6:38:00 AM
Wishing away yesterday's melancholy memories, your words depict well the love forsaken and waxed candles. Well crafted rhyme and refrain... reads like a winning poem, nette.
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Date: 5/13/2018 4:37:00 AM
Simply captivating, Nette!
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