"oh Boy!"

“Oh Boy!”

Summer was swirling in my head.
Boys, romance novels, teen mags were all that I read.
I just got my car and my license, enough said.
“So, you’ve locked your car with your car engine running, your car alarm sounding,
your air conditioner blowing, your window shield wipers wiping, your radio blaring,
your headlights are glowing and your purse is in your car too?” asked Officer Ted.




True story.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/21/2010 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's contest "The Light Is On, But Nobody Is Home" Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2010 8:48:00 PM
Smile! I think I know Officer Ted--Smile, if You know what I mean? Smile, what a moment this must have been for such a young lady ~ So, how did it all turn out? Did Officer Ted use his lock pop technique to save Your Lovelies day? Smile, "Pretty Write" ~ "Love & Warmth As Always," John! ~ Smile, time for one more dear....
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Date: 6/14/2010 7:07:00 AM
Congrats on your Marie win.....Great Write ...Larry
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Date: 6/14/2010 3:04:00 AM
HAHAHA!Congrats on your win! Happens to the best of us.
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Date: 6/13/2010 9:24:00 PM
Big Congrats Marie on your win in Paula's contest...with this true write .. great job and good entry .. enjoy your success.. with luv Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/13/2010 8:16:00 PM
Congrats on 3rd place win, Marie
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Date: 6/13/2010 8:12:00 PM
I have met sixteen year olds like this. I suspect Officer Ted has too. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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