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I will turn back the beautiful pages of my childhood life with a deep love that cuts my heart like a knife- I am walking hand in hand with my father in a park, and in the distance is the sound of a dog bark; then, closer the song of a morning lark- There in that park is a pond that glistens in the sun, where we gaze- then traverse the nearby woods for fun and because of this exploring my love of nature had begun. Holding my hand, father walks me up steep steps of a church and an interior beautiful we examine and search- Along the paths we journeyed, we collected rocks and things, father would explain about feathers found from bird wings; and from curling vines we made finger rings. But, these reflections from the past also sorrow brings. Because there came a day when I had to let go of his hand, and it was in that same church where I had to stand; after mother told me- father had gone to God's promised land. Oh, bittersweet the memory . . . _________________________ April 20, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Oh, Bittersweet The Memory Copyright Protected, ID 1091-905-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 12/18/2018 2:26:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota for visiting my poem with that nice comment , appreciate ~
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Date: 12/16/2018 2:53:00 PM
Thank you for clearly relating such memories. With Christmas almost here, deep warm thoughts of my Dad come to me Vividly. My Dad kept my baby shoes and My first birthday card from my grandfather. These are decades old but I cherish each one.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:25:00 PM
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Date: 12/12/2018 4:37:00 AM
Jennifer, thank you for visiting my poem with that great comment, appreciate. I have so many wonderful memories of my father, he was a funny man too and a man full of quotes. He loved nature and animals and shared that with me. He was taken from me suddenly with no time for goodbye ~
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Date: 12/11/2018 10:40:00 AM
I cried when I read your poem Dear Heart. I had a very similar relationship with my father and understood the pain you felt when it was time to let go his hand. And in the same church truly moved me. A talented write. Festive hugs, Jennifer
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Constance La France
Date: 12/12/2018 4:34:00 AM
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Date: 12/8/2018 10:00:00 AM
Robert, thank you so much for visiting my poem with that great comment and for the FAV ~
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Date: 12/6/2018 8:37:00 PM
This my dear friend brought tears to my eyes. Dad passed away in 1969, morning of his 68th birthday. I think of him every , every day.. Great poem , a fav...
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Constance La France
Date: 12/8/2018 9:58:00 AM
Thanks for the FAV ~.~
Date: 12/5/2018 9:48:00 AM
Winged, thanks for visiting my poem with comment. This was an emotional write for sure, miss my dad so much ~
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:47:00 AM
Pixie, thank for visiting my poetry and commenting, appreciate. I know all about saying goodbye as I have lost almost everyone I ever loved to death, which explains why I write sad poetry ~.~
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:43:00 AM
Carolyn, thank you for visiting with that beautiful comment. I was lucky to have such a great relationship with my father as many do not. My Grandma did not know what her real name was for half her life and when she found out it was Helena she just loved it, never a Lee or a Lena but a Helena till her death, and I was her Dear Heart ~
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/5/2018 10:51:00 AM
Thank you for sharing that, Dear Heart. My grandma Helena was special to me too and my middle name was taken from hers. I also take my love for gardening and sewing from her. Hugs, carolyn
Date: 12/5/2018 9:40:00 AM
John, thanks for visiting my poem with that great comment, yes we had a very special bond ~.~
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Date: 12/5/2018 6:43:00 AM
A very deep emotional write Dear Heart...bitter sweet memories...love & light...^WW^
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Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2018 9:37:00 AM
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Date: 12/5/2018 5:19:00 AM
wow, that touches my heart deeply. How hard it is to say goodbye to those we love, Your poetry leaves a mark of lasting valor. Have a wonderful day my dear friend, xo
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Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2018 9:37:00 AM
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Date: 12/4/2018 3:48:00 PM
Sweet friend, I do know just how you feel about your father. We seem to have very similar memories of our families. We both had grandmothers named Helena and I miss mine, just as you do. It is hard to read such beautiful poetry without shedding a tear. Your poem touched me deeply. Sending love and winning wishes for this wonderful write! Hugs, carolyn
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Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2018 9:36:00 AM
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Date: 12/4/2018 3:22:00 PM
Constance, it sounds like you have so many wonderful memories of your dad, thank you for sharing them. All the best. John
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Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2018 9:36:00 AM
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Date: 12/4/2018 2:06:00 PM
Chris, thanks for visiting my poem and for that wonderful comment. My father and I, had a very special relationship that even death cannot diminish ~.~
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Date: 12/4/2018 10:34:00 AM
Wow, this was very sad Dear Heart, The memories for the most part were beautiful but the loss is heartbreaking. Though, as a father I can only hope that memories such as these will remain with my daughters long after I am gone. This was wonderful.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/4/2018 2:05:00 PM
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