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Oh, Beautiful Nature

Has solitude ever led your steps down a green hued forest path to linger in tranquility The birds are singing a sweet symphony for me from the tangled trees that sway in a Fall breeze the forest pauses as it begins to let go of leaves some are twirling and spinning dressed in yellow I linger beside a rippling stream resting on a rock above me the sky is bright blue as clouds sail by in the stream fish glide past in the cold water I close my eyes to listen to the song of the forest Soon, the leaves repose to lay in their death decay until snowflakes are falling filigree on trees falling, falling falling white ~ footprints in new fallen snow _______________________ October 8, 2021 Poetry/Verse/Couplet unrhymed, Imagism unrhymed/ Choka Copyright Protected, ID 10-1396-006-08/ Oh, Beautiful Nature All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Example for my contest Let's Mix it Up

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Date: 10/20/2021 9:29:00 PM
Wow! So picturesque... Thanks for sharing this, exemplifying what your contest requires. God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/21/2021 7:03:00 AM
Beata, thanks for the compliment on my poem ~ God bless ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/8/2021 7:46:00 PM
This is a great verse in nature, Constance, love reading. Great example.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/9/2021 7:40:00 AM
Eve, thank you for visiting and for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/8/2021 1:21:00 PM
This is beautiful - I hope I can meet the challenge as beautifully as you have. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 10/8/2021 1:42:00 PM
Gina, thank you for the compliment and I know you can write a beauty ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/8/2021 12:25:00 PM
Very beautiful Constance. Thank you for penning this living beauty. I have no forest to walk through and to see the trees change to fall. I loved the memories of early childhood of New York, though vague. You brought me into a world I could almost feel. So very beautiful and descriptive!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/8/2021 1:42:00 PM
BJ, thank you for the compliment and the lovely comment _love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/8/2021 11:42:00 AM
Ah, beautiful.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/8/2021 1:43:00 PM
Chetta, thanks for the compliment~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/8/2021 10:23:00 AM
wow, Constance. So beautiful. I was looking earlier for a contest for you and if this was it and posted earlier, I did not even catch it. It looks like a challenge but an inspiring one!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/8/2021 1:45:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment, I only posted the contest today, I wanted to do something different. I know it looks complicated but it really is not ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/8/2021 10:09:00 AM
Beautifully done, this felt good to read.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/8/2021 10:13:00 AM
Chris, thank you for the compliment on my poem, appreciate ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

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