Oh, Autumn

Today I really feel it; I feel it in the air,
and even though I still can feel sun’s glow,
the breeze is blowing cooler through my hair.
Mr. Sun, your throne seems to be getting low
up there in September’s blue so fair.

Oh, Autumn, you are here now. You are here!
Since the Equinox I’ve truly known.
Nature calls for you; I need no seer,
no fanfare or announcement. I’ve simply grown
accustomed to knowing when you are near!

October’s on the doorstep. I feel that too.
Geese in V’s will cross God’s heaven on the way
to warmer climes. A most wondrous view
will greet me when the mountains I’ve seen every day
flaunt garbs of brilliant hues! But why do I feel blue?

It never fails,  this melancholy comes to me in fall
regardless of the beauty that I see.
Like my life, oh Autumn, you come not at a crawl,
but quickening your pace, you come each year to me.
Just one time, Autumn, let the winter wait . . . please stall.

Oct. 2, 2021 for Emile Pinet's 
the 'Quintain (Sicilian)' Poetry Contest
For Your Favorite Poem Of 2021 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke
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Kauffman Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 11:56 AM
This so reminds me of the song "If I could turn back time" or maybe just put on the brakes to slow it down! Winter has been slow to come here in CA this fall with extended warm day and little rain! Wonderfully written Andrea! with your signature imagery. Congratulations on your win!
Agustin Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 3:47 AM
Congrats again! Thanks for sharing this... and the delight Autumn brings. God bless you.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 7:46 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. As you know this poem was a fave of mine. Happy Thanksgiving my friend. Enjoy your family time. Blessings xxoo
Costales Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 10:39 AM
My favorite season - I echo your wish for winter to stall. Lovely tribute to Autumn Jjote
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 2:07 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea! This is a beautiful piece on Autumn, expressed with a perfect rhyme scheme. Well done, My Dear Friend ... touching as usual with your wonderful poetic style. A fave for me! Love and warm wishes ~ Mala
Ashley Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 5:55 PM
Oh, Andrea! Your lustrous pen shines in this Autumn gem. The fall season sparkles under your spell and your heart shines through your poetic words. Simply beautiful! Congratulations on your excellent win in Emile’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Moore Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 5:43 PM
How nice to read your poetry again, Andrea! I am new to Poetry Soup, don't know my way around, and only accidentally found you. You described autumn and its melancholy so well. Not that I experience that here in the islands, but I do recall it from my past stay on the mainland. Warm aloha, Molly
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October 19, 2021 at 6:29 AM
Andrea, A beautiful piece,~”it never fails, this melancholy comes to me in fall”…..so well said and very true, for me too. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Paulette
Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 3:23 PM
Congrats on your winner. Sara
Theraven Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 10:43 AM
Andrea, I think on this poem when I see the nomadic birds flying in formation. The winter can't be kept waiting for long. -Richard
Jones Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 3:19 PM
Congrats on a much deserved win
Peck Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 2:30 PM
I love your last two lines, especially, and also I need no seer, no fanfare or announcement. A good description of Autumn's approach! Congratulations on your placement!
Logan Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 11:33 AM
Well done for a winning placement, Andrea.
Pinet Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations Andrea! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest called for exacting syllable counts and perfect rhymes, as requirements of this form. Well done my friend, Emile.
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 11:08 PM
A lovely, soft and beautifully poem of autumn. Another petal from your bouquet of poetry for my basket of favs sweet Andrea! God bless you, He sure has blessed your pen <3
Bayles Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 10:49 PM
That's a very nice poem for the contest, Andrea.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 5:42 PM
Fall colors fade too fast, and then naked trees seem so depressed while undressed. I love this poem Andrea. Your talent shines so brilliantly. I am sure Emile will adore this entry. Another fave for me! Blessings xxoo
Grasso Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 4:33 PM
A lovely poem, Andrea> ...Fran
Skelly Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 11:23 PM
Autumn is a beautiful month, the summer is lingering but the change has begun...Delice
Brewer Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 7:44 AM
A lovely example of this Quintain form with an appealing bitter sweet shading at the end (and a sentiment I can share). Good one! Andrea.
Laurie Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 3:11 PM
Hello Andrea ... really well written verse Andrea. It truly has that ring about what autumn offers - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Theraven Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Hello Andrea, 'It never fails, this melancholy comes to me in fall ~~ regardless of the beauty that I see.' You understand the season so well. Especially for one's living in the autumn of their life. Maybe a time to think back on spring and summers past., with melancholy dreams that never seemed to last. -Richard
Maverick Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 7:43 AM
Oh how I agree with the sentiment expressed In this piece that resonates so strongly with Me Andrea, I shall attempt a a (time wall build) If I succeed no doubt you'll be thrilled.' And I will let you have any extra available Cause I'm like that; LOL))))
Lawless Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 6:22 AM
YEAH, fall is kinda like Cinderella....a quick flirtatious dance and then......great job on the passing fancy of fall Andrea.
Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 4:41 AM
Yes, autumn we can enjoy but winter is a little harsh. Maybe it will be late and mild this year but I feel here in the south it is going to be a really cold one. Sara
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