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Oh, Songbird

I glisten in the shining wind. . . oh, songbird, fly me away April 19, 2017 N/A in a haiku contest

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Date: 5/25/2017 2:07:00 PM
Beautiful haiku written in the wonderful style of the masters! Love it! A 7 for sure! This is the caliber of haiku I hope to write one day:-)! All the best! Pandita
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Date: 5/9/2017 3:37:00 PM
Wonderfully expressed this glorious gem. A beautiful 7 sure. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 5/1/2017 5:06:00 PM
Beautiful! You have raised the bar, Andrea! Regards // paul
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Date: 4/26/2017 9:58:00 PM
Lovely!
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Date: 4/25/2017 5:55:00 AM
A lovely haiku Andrea... So cute... Good luck with the contest... A big 7...
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Date: 4/25/2017 12:04:00 AM
I really liked your entry Andrea. Outstanding imagery in this little gem! 7 ; )
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Date: 4/23/2017 10:05:00 AM
I fly with you, dear Andrea:) a 7:)
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Date: 4/22/2017 9:54:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this beautiful moment. Shalom
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Date: 4/22/2017 4:57:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Andrea. Competition is fierce with this contest, so I'd better get my thinking cap on! Good luck! Regards, John.
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Date: 4/21/2017 11:48:00 AM
I loved the idea of wind shining, totally unique and original thought Andrea.
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Date: 4/21/2017 7:38:00 AM
This is Heavenly.
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Date: 4/20/2017 7:34:00 PM
how quickly our thoughts turn when a songbird sings..good luck
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Date: 4/20/2017 3:06:00 PM
Nice writing Andrea! All the best in the contest.
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Date: 4/20/2017 10:22:00 AM
A beautiful ku Andrea...It carried me away
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Date: 4/20/2017 8:25:00 AM
Great haiku Andrea..
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Date: 4/20/2017 8:19:00 AM
Both Haiku and poem are so beautifully penned.. To climb like a song bird on a stairway to heaven..Free.and to sing like a bird...beautiful.
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Date: 4/20/2017 3:10:00 AM
what a beautiful modern haiku Andrea:-) I can't seem to get away from the 5 7 5 form - you have inspired me to try:-) (the captcha is JET) lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/20/2017 2:53:00 AM
- Beautiful haiku, Andrea - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/20/2017 2:43:00 AM
There is something magical within thoughts of "flying away". Your words are so beautiful evoking wonder and awe. Superb Haiku Andrea:) lynnxxx
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Date: 4/19/2017 11:04:00 PM
I just loved this, for some reason at he moment, I just wish, someone could fly me away!!! hugs!
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