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Oh, Songbird

I glisten

in the shining wind. . .

oh, songbird, fly me away


April 19, 2017 
N/A in a haiku contest

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/25/2017 2:07:00 PM

Beautiful haiku written in the wonderful style of the masters! Love it! A 7 for sure! This is the caliber of haiku I hope to write one day:-)! All the best! Pandita

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/9/2017 3:37:00 PM

Wonderfully expressed this glorious gem. A beautiful 7 sure. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Paul Callus

Date: 5/1/2017 5:06:00 PM

Beautiful! You have raised the bar, Andrea! Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/26/2017 9:58:00 PM

Lovely!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 4/25/2017 5:55:00 AM

A lovely haiku Andrea... So cute... Good luck with the contest... A big 7...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/25/2017 12:04:00 AM

I really liked your entry Andrea. Outstanding imagery in this little gem! 7 ; )

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/23/2017 10:05:00 AM

I fly with you, dear Andrea:) a 7:)

Anil Deo

Date: 4/22/2017 9:54:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this beautiful moment. Shalom

John Michaels

Date: 4/22/2017 4:57:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Andrea. Competition is fierce with this contest, so I'd better get my thinking cap on! Good luck! Regards, John.

Miraj Raha

Date: 4/21/2017 11:48:00 AM

I loved the idea of wind shining, totally unique and original thought Andrea.

Jennifer Walker

Date: 4/21/2017 7:38:00 AM

This is Heavenly.

Frederic Parker

Date: 4/20/2017 7:34:00 PM

how quickly our thoughts turn when a songbird sings..good luck

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 4/20/2017 3:06:00 PM

Nice writing Andrea! All the best in the contest.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/20/2017 10:22:00 AM

A beautiful ku Andrea...It carried me away

Joseph May

Date: 4/20/2017 8:25:00 AM

Great haiku Andrea..

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/20/2017 8:19:00 AM

Both Haiku and poem are so beautifully penned.. To climb like a song bird on a stairway to heaven..Free.and to sing like a bird...beautiful.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/20/2017 3:10:00 AM

what a beautiful modern haiku Andrea:-) I can't seem to get away from the 5 7 5 form - you have inspired me to try:-) (the captcha is JET) lol:-) hugs Jan xx