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Oh, Songbird

I glisten

in the shining wind. . .

oh, songbird, fly me away


April 19, 2017 
N/A in a haiku contest

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Pandita Sietesantos

May 25, 2017 at 2:07 PM

Beautiful haiku written in the wonderful style of the masters! Love it! A 7 for sure! This is the caliber of haiku I hope to write one day:-)! All the best! Pandita

Bl Devnath

May 9, 2017 at 3:37 PM

Wonderfully expressed this glorious gem. A beautiful 7 sure. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Paul Callus

May 1, 2017 at 5:06 PM

Beautiful! You have raised the bar, Andrea! Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

April 26, 2017 at 9:58 PM

Lovely!

Supraja Kannan

April 25, 2017 at 5:55 AM

A lovely haiku Andrea... So cute... Good luck with the contest... A big 7...

Connie Marcum Wong

April 25, 2017 at 12:04 AM

I really liked your entry Andrea. Outstanding imagery in this little gem! 7 ; )

Joanna Daniel

April 23, 2017 at 10:05 AM

I fly with you, dear Andrea:) a 7:)

Anil Deo

April 22, 2017 at 9:54 PM

Thanks for sharing this beautiful moment. Shalom

John Michaels

April 22, 2017 at 4:57 AM

Lovely imagery, Andrea. Competition is fierce with this contest, so I'd better get my thinking cap on! Good luck! Regards, John.

Miraj Raha

April 21, 2017 at 11:48 AM

I loved the idea of wind shining, totally unique and original thought Andrea.

Jennifer Walker

April 21, 2017 at 7:38 AM

This is Heavenly.

Frederic Parker

April 20, 2017 at 7:34 PM

how quickly our thoughts turn when a songbird sings..good luck

Kudzai Mhangwa

April 20, 2017 at 3:06 PM

Nice writing Andrea! All the best in the contest.

Tim Smith

April 20, 2017 at 10:22 AM

A beautiful ku Andrea...It carried me away

Joseph May

April 20, 2017 at 8:25 AM

Great haiku Andrea..

Charmaine Chircop

April 20, 2017 at 8:19 AM

Both Haiku and poem are so beautifully penned.. To climb like a song bird on a stairway to heaven..Free.and to sing like a bird...beautiful.

Jan Allison

April 20, 2017 at 3:10 AM

what a beautiful modern haiku Andrea:-) I can't seem to get away from the 5 7 5 form - you have inspired me to try:-) (the captcha is JET) lol:-) hugs Jan xx