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Off You Go !

> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Geese honking, flapping, Excited, winging northward, V formation fly, Tell our northern friends "hello", Fly high!.. Safe journey!.. Goodby!

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/22/2011 5:46:00 PM

Great formation that adds so much to what I see.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/4/2010 4:33:00 AM

Excellent design and write..I love those geese that let me know of spring and winter....Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Date: 4/11/2010 6:06:00 AM

I like the artistic presentation. It really adds interest and enhances your words. You have me smiling with the lighthearted feel of your poem. Keep on writing. Karen

Skat A

Date: 4/3/2010 11:51:00 AM

This is so cool . Have your self a nice Easter

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/30/2010 5:31:00 AM

I love the imagery ... quite nostalgic. Great write.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/20/2010 1:53:00 PM

cute shape and poem, you are talented--if I try to make a larger scale picture it never stays in place---it will shift over a few lines and skew the picture. any suggestions?

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/17/2010 4:29:00 PM

Very delightful poem, Robert... I guess it's our turn to welcome the geese!!! Goes to my favs today..truly delightful

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/17/2010 12:08:00 PM

What a wonderful day it is today and it is a pleasure to have time to read some poetry today. I am happy that yours is amongst the ones I have read today Robert. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/17/2010 1:47:00 AM

Stress-free flights invigorating strength and vitality to spectators from below. A good approach of tanka you have here, Robert. (^_^) Noel.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/16/2010 11:51:00 PM

A very creative picture..I really enjoyed this..BG

Mitch White

Date: 3/16/2010 9:18:00 PM

Great visual, they do seem excited when they fly overhead

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2010 7:10:00 PM

Great idea Robert and nice depiction of geese in flight.. very imaginative with wonderful words to finish your poetic picture..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/16/2010 6:48:00 PM

We see them often over our house....amazing how they always know when and where to go...so facinating a thing is nature! Nice one, Robert! ~ Love, Carrie