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Off White - Love Story

The melt trickles off to the creek bed pure white has up and disappeared green grasses grow into the forefront leading to where tenderness' been bared Hot flames flicker with the innocence covers uncovered in a big ball of trust red lips painted in sweet cherry wine hearts are left lying without wanderlust Into the spring we stretch out our reach blooming alongside all nature's glory revealing our skin, soaking in sunshine writing new chapters in life's love story

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/23/2018 12:39:00 PM
another romantic,hit, tim; splendid!..huggs
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Date: 1/23/2018 1:29:00 AM
Hi Tim, I came to read this again, and on second read, I find this way deeper that I did the first time around! I love how you write in a way that is both romantic, but always caries deeper undertones! I am not always good at giving comments, but felt this poem, and it just came to me to say it.
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Date: 1/22/2018 6:43:00 PM
Oh, I loved that line about revealing our skin, soaking in sunshine. And the last line seals it so romantically.
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Date: 1/22/2018 1:14:00 AM
Pretty smooth write there. :)
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Date: 1/21/2018 7:23:00 PM
Another intoxicating write Tim :)...and love springs! :)
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Date: 1/21/2018 1:39:00 PM
Oh another beauty my dear friend Tim! You're so amazing at writing love poems. Make the hearts all over happy :)
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Date: 1/21/2018 2:53:00 AM
Wow, really like how you did this one, cheers
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Date: 1/19/2018 8:14:00 PM
So beautiful! One of my favs! I always look forward to spring
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Date: 1/19/2018 3:09:00 PM
- I enjoy your love story, Tim - Lovely written - I wish you a wonderful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/19/2018 11:52:00 AM
i hope this doesnt sound frantic....but tim, you are a hopeless romantic....which, i feel, is the best way for a man to be....for woman defines our destiny....and we are here to protect and cherish her at all costs....for woman is the gateway to the future, without her, all is lost....great write as always tim....
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Date: 1/18/2018 9:33:00 PM
Beautiful ink Tim, you really do have a way with words.
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