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Of Thee I Sang

Michael, the archangel, was found dead on my lawn this morning - stuffed inside a Gestapo boot. Crisp, black leather containing the remnants of abandoned halos and wasted youth, boiled in a caldron of political mire. A hierarchy of ghostly auras, resembling pillars of spoiled sovereignty, observed the vapid thrashing; lending no assistance - just applause. These obese vultures, donning the colors of democracy, are strategically seated at our convoluted round table of insurgents; freely feasting on scrumptious foreign sanctions laden with an array of toothy seasonings. These heavy-footed executioners are quietly working in government funded pawn shops disguised as altruistic patriots – holding our cherished heartland in their right palm and clandestine protection in their left. On hearsay – the destitute, our children, our sons and the elderly, are blindly vocalizing “Of Thee I Sing” truisms and saving blood stained scraps of tattered angel wings as noteworthy souvenirs. Gagging on their own internal suffering; the brokenhearted are now pinning these superficial mementoes upon their children's headstones - because they - just like we have been unconsciously controlled to quietly conform and solemnly accept.

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Date: 3/23/2011 3:55:00 AM
John, this is a wonderful write, so deserved of a first place, well done:))
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your superb win! This is beyond remarkable, John. Though it brings all the pain back to mind, it is worth every bit of it, if it would awaken us from our sleep of content! Annalise
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Date: 3/21/2011 10:39:00 AM
A heartfelt congratulations to you John for your 1st Place win in Catie's contest "Free Verse Frenzy". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2011 6:32:00 AM
I agree with Kory 100 percent. Congratulations , John. ANOTHER MASTERPIECE of writing. Elaine
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Date: 3/21/2011 12:52:00 AM
striking and riveting, john... a contemporary piece that deserves topp win in the contest! congrats..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/20/2011 6:56:00 PM
I admire your wit and respect your opinions, John. Congratulations on your clear victory. I do hope you plan to publish this political piece. Bless the families who have sacrificed for the world's freedom, regardless! RAY
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Date: 3/20/2011 12:52:00 PM
This is superb and understandably the best in this contest. I am going thru each line looking at each adjective you used to describe these vultures and I couldn't have said it any better. The brokenhearted need to stand up and say NO MORE! We are sick of your antics! A patriotic HUG and a high 5 for you too!!!! Gwendolen
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Date: 3/20/2011 11:25:00 AM
You're the bad-boy to beat! I don't care what people say about you in or out of blogs or whatever, when it comes to poetry; you are the best on this site, man. You're honest, you pull no punches and you deliver both emotionally and physically. You challenge the reader to reread your outstanding art. You are one of thee most contemporary poets of our time. You create the imagery and pose the questions and give us probable solutions. You, my friend, are a truly gifted wonderboy. Best always, KC
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Date: 3/20/2011 10:57:00 AM
As ever....you have knocked my socks off! Always outstanding poetry, John!! I marvel at your craft !:)
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Date: 3/20/2011 9:57:00 AM
A very powerful poem with perspectives on politics and life, John. Many excellent and compelling lines. Congratulations on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/20/2011 8:00:00 AM
Well done John, good to see you at the top. Congratulations on your worthy honor in first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/8/2008 4:08:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 10/7/2008 2:34:00 PM
"SANG" is right, John. BRAVO! When I think of the cannon fodder kids doing four tours of duty it makes me furious. Win the White House at any cost seems to be the rule....on and on. Congrats on posting this one. Love, daver
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Date: 10/6/2008 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations John on being featured this week. All of your poems are a masterpiece in my opinion. Above and beyond the rest. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/6/2008 8:34:00 AM
Well worth singing , John and a superb piece..
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Date: 10/6/2008 8:04:00 AM
They will only listen to violence, John. As long as we, the apathetic, bow our heads and accept it, we lose. There are no parties, just classes, the elite, the middle and the low. Ten years from now, maybe sooner, guess which one gets eliminated. Congratulations on this great write being featured. Vince
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Date: 10/5/2008 11:23:00 PM
Congrats on your feature this week John.Rgds Brian
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