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Of jaded muses and digital distractions - POTW

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The allure of mused poems, No longer visits this nonchalant psyche. It trickles now, once a roaring torrent Now a lazy stream Am like a desultory jaded heaven Where starry jewels once decked the night, But are now drossy shadowy blackholes, And sparks and dreams, Are ripped in the accretion disc. No longer avid, but seeking meaning in the mundane. No longer enraptured by the she said, he said, And all that jazz, no iota of care; for trifling muses, Their short goodbyes or critique, no not one, Their infighting and bad blood, no longer, No nuts to crack, nor rain to flush, no iota of care. It was never about who is better, Neither has it been nor will it ever be, About any Magnum Opus. Like doors closing and skies descending, Each visiting muse devoid of ardor, Oblivious to the yawning dawn, Or the scent of sprouting posies. Jaded, without allure or sheen And devoid of all its lustre. Maybe one day soon a spark will reignite And reanimate this frenetic mused madness But until then... I remain adrift in this sea of trivialities, Worrying about trifling stuff Like ad blockers and AI opinions And irked... By their emasculating knowledge

Poem Of The Week(POTW) -9/15/2024 To 9/21/2024

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Date: 10/26/2024 10:44:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/17/2024 6:25:00 PM
True poetry Mo. When the inspiration is gone, then what? In comes the trivial and mundane, the minutiae of life. Enjoy your special week
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Date: 9/17/2024 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTW. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 9/16/2024 7:29:00 PM
"It trickles now, once a roaring torrent Now a lazy stream." So apt! Congratulations for the POTW honour!
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Date: 9/16/2024 7:05:00 AM
Hello Marugu, There are so many distractions that technology puts on society and creativity. So well stated and all the exasperation that comes with change. A great POTW and I hope that muse does return. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 9/15/2024 4:31:00 PM
The muse: ' It trickles, ' but now a lazy stream. ' Yes, I think we can all relate. It's can be frustrating, but waiting is best. ' Words ' will always appear when the time is right. :) You've created a masterpiece, my dear friend. Congratulations Marugu, on Poem of the Week. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Marugu Mo
Date: 9/16/2024 2:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Brandy
Date: 9/15/2024 10:26:00 AM
Quite a thought provoking verse Marugu, congratulations to you on the honour of POTW. Tom
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Date: 9/16/2024 2:50:00 AM
Thanks Tom
Date: 9/15/2024 10:21:00 AM
Well well decorum at it’s finest, a poetic feast of analogies, thank you Mr Mo
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Marugu Mo
Date: 9/16/2024 4:12:00 AM
Thx my friend!
Date: 9/15/2024 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your write. "Write On" Have a blessed day/week with your win................
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Marugu Mo
Date: 9/16/2024 2:50:00 AM
Thanks Paula!
Date: 9/15/2024 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on POTW.
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Marugu Mo
Date: 9/16/2024 2:50:00 AM
Thanks Hilda
Date: 9/15/2024 5:29:00 AM
Wow MM - Firstly congrats on your POTW. This is Theatrical - I'm glad i stumbled on your rendition. As a writer, both lyric and video maker, as well as being in love with Theatre, I salute your narration. Maria
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Marugu Mo
Date: 9/16/2024 2:49:00 AM
Thanks. I am intrigued with your line of work. In this day and age one might be tempted to think Theatre and the performing arts are dead. I will visit
Date: 9/12/2024 11:57:00 AM
When the muse loses its shine, it leaves us drifting in the shadows, Very nicely penned
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Marugu Mo
Date: 9/13/2024 9:11:00 PM
thanks Joseph
Date: 9/12/2024 7:28:00 AM
Wow! What a powerful piece and matching presentation! I love the music and wonderful inflections in your voice! This has so much passion and should be poem of the day! Cool beans! I appreciate your sharing!
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Date: 9/12/2024 8:02:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and visit. About the voice that's AI generated. I thought I experiment with spoken word and dramatic monologue prompts. I liked what it spewed out and here we are
Date: 9/11/2024 6:44:00 PM
Wow! Where do i begin praising this MM, i just love the spoken too, so powerful! And your words resonate with me and you really have a way with words! I cant even! I love especially “ No longer avid, but seeking meaning in the mundane. No longer enraptured by the she said, he said, And all that jazz, no iota of care; for trifling muses, Their short goodbyes or critique, no not one,“ how powerful! Whoa! And the ending! I was just thinking the same two days ago, about how im sick and tired, of AI opinions, and yes Maybe one day soon a spark will reignite, until then, dont stop, expressing anyhow! What an impressive write this is! A fave definitely. Sending you light always
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Marugu Mo
Date: 9/11/2024 11:41:00 PM
Thanks Inky. Ironically creating poetry when feeling so sapped of creativity. I was inspired to re-post/re-write this by your poem vanishing point. Thanks for your thoughtful words. Love&Light
Date: 9/10/2024 12:29:00 PM
Quite a philosophical and intellectual write.. great use of vocabulary and expression here..
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Marugu Mo
Date: 9/11/2024 1:31:00 AM
Thanks SO
Date: 9/10/2024 5:03:00 AM
Interesting lines penned. Thanks for sharing. We all go through dry spells but then there will be a spark to ignite a large volume of work. Sara K
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Marugu Mo
Date: 9/10/2024 8:28:00 AM
Thanks Sara. I sure hope so

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