Notes About The Poem

Of Highs and Lows

How deep this shallow vision lies
     that holds a truth my grasp can't reach
     will never last, too quickly dies
     in veiled perception too vague to seek.

     In colors daylight will never know
     this euphoric dream can't come to fast
     away reality, too harsh to show
     those lost reflections of the past.

     From darkened weakness a light is lost
     of choices made, conceived in fear
     but one is left to pay the cost
     of songs of love I did not hear.

     Will hope replace despair?
     Is anyone left to care?


     The Colorful Drug Contest
     Sponsored By Lewis Raynes 06/01/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Grasso Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 7:22 AM
I love this one too, Charlie. Your sonnets are all beautiful. ...Fran
Lindley Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 5:23 AM
Another truly great poem from your golden pen and a sonnet that resonates with me my friend. A7 and added to my fav list..
Smith Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 7:05 AM
Thank you Robert, you are too kind...
Haight Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 10:30 AM
A great take on the contest theme, Charlie. Nice to see you on the winners' list. Congratulations! Sandra
Smith Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Thank you Sandra...
Puddifoot Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 5:40 AM
good entry here, unusual to tackle this subject in sonnet form - congrats on your contest win!
Smith Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Thank you Charlotte and good to see you high on the honors list...
DiMino Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 9:40 PM
Great use of language, Charlie! If not for one's own hopeful ego, often nothing returning for our efforts but more troubling silence. Good luck with your entry.
Smith Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 9:51 PM
Thanks for the encouragement Joe. I appreciate your visit...
Teagan Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Very awesome, Charlie... makes a good point.
Smith Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Thank you Becca...
Manassian Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Those last lines drive the point home so well, Charlie. We are all in some way addicted to one thing or the other. Good luck in the contest.
Smith Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 11:21 AM
You're spot on Eileen, and thank you for the visit...
Allison Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 3:20 PM
Great take on the contest Charlie I am seeing such a wide range of themes for this contest:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 7:08 PM
Thank you Jan...
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