Of Angels and Their Folded Wings

The angels, with their folded wings
walk on silent ground

They know not whether
to weep, 
or wield their sighing harps.

It seems like hearts are stones, 
or jewels would they be?

Precious gems, maybe.

Of different hues, 
with scattered light.

Encrusted, unpolished
by time and tears,
and by things spoken 
and not...

The angels, moving forward--
with their timid halos
 and shorn heads-

their soles
 touching sacred ground.








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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 9/22/2014 1:57:00 PM
Beautiful, Nikko! :) I liked how you used your punctuation and spacing on this one! :) The content is sweet! Oh.....but why did you shear their heads? ;) Hair is what attracts me to the most. Ok...silliness aside....hearts or stone or gems? I loved how you ran with that thought...contrasting the two! Beautiful!
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Date: 4/11/2014 10:39:00 PM
NIKKO, Congratulations, on your win:) Enjoyed stopping by. LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/11/2014 9:36:00 PM
Hi Nikko, , Congratulations, In Charlotte's MIX, contest.... always~ Linda
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Date: 4/11/2014 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/11/2014 7:42:00 PM
Nikko, I am seeing your wondrous poem again and also YOU on a winners' list second time in a row. It feels like old times. Hope you come back again and again. Congrats.
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Date: 4/11/2014 3:50:00 PM
a very intriguing piece, nikko, and it made an impression on me from the first time I read it; I knew it was going to place high - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Date: 12/29/2013 11:16:00 AM
Nikko well it has been a while since I was here but I am delighted to have read this gem it has a wonderful flow and a very vivid image, great ending as well, have a great New Year my friend….David
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Date: 12/27/2013 10:55:00 AM
WOW, my friend. This is you at top form. Thanks so much for putting up this new angelic poem. I have to rush off very soon. It's TGIF Thank god it's Friday movie day. See ya later, alligator.
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Date: 12/27/2013 9:29:00 AM
Fantastic! This made me smile. It's great to read something new from you!!!!!!!! =D
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Date: 12/26/2013 4:08:00 PM
- Thank you for your beautiful poem, nice to read a poem from you ..... long time no see ... - Hope Christmas was good for you and your family - I wish you a peaceful and happy new year! - Take care of everyone you love and yourself. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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