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Ode To My Hero, Honest Abe

" Exult O shores, and ring O bells!       
But I with mournful tread, 
Walk the deck my Captain lies, 
Fallen cold and dead."(Final lines from Walt Whitman's "O Captain My Captain")

My hero, oh how wonderful it would have been to know you personally, to have spent time with you, especially since I learned the way you were back then both as a child, then as a man – so strong, so wise, so true! The way you’ve been described, you had a gangly look - not a handsome lad, but oh, you were so bright! You were poor, but you did all you could just to find a book, one you might savor late into the night. I relate to how you had a very human side; to the way you loved to play a prank or talk jokingly. You never were unkind, and you had no worldly pride. Preferring friends to chores, you also loved poetry! What other man born in a cabin would rise up and accomplish so much? Predestined for greatness, you had inside you the desire to be better! When you realized that your country boy dialect was such a hindrance, you taught yourself proper English to climb higher! You were so very good, and your soul so godly old! Once in New Orleans you witnessed the African's sad plight - men and women chained like animals were being sold. All you saw, felt and heard determined you'd fight for the right! You had no religion, Honest Abe, but you looked to God! Freeing slaves, you also would have fought for women’s freedom too. A melancholy man at times, and maybe a bit odd, “ O Captain, my Captain,” poets ever more will praise you. For "To Honor My Hero" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon
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Alex Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 6:22 AM
"You had no religion, Honest Abe, but you looked to God!" - Perhaps, the greatest religion. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 12:47 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. It would be great to talk with him. Have a great/blessed day.............
Kauffman Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 10:30 AM
Andrea, congratulations for your win! I remember reading this and thought I had commented. I love the integration of Whitman's poem and your eloquent words for Abraham Lincoln. Isn't it interesting that Abe, like Abraham, led his people to a new land and a new understanding of man! Wonderfully done in your delightful poetic style my friend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 8:20 AM
In Lincoln’s poem “My Childhood Home I see again” where he says “O Memory! thou midway world 'Twixt earth and paradise, Where things decayed and loved ones lost In dreamy shadows rise,” those lines, the entire poem actually, show his sensitive nature not many know of. You and I have studied this gracious soul and we know. I love your tribute to him Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo
Brul Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 7:11 PM
This is a very beautiful poem to open my day...I love Abe Lincoln, too..A truly admirable Leader. My son used to recite, “Oh Captain My Captain” when he was 3 years old.Definitely a Fave!!
Legros Kelley Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 10:38 AM
My goodness, this is breathtaking and beautiful beyond words. You now have set me in motion to grab my books about Honest Abe and reread all I have read about him! Beautiful heartfelt tribute Andrea! Congratulations!
Watt Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 7:26 PM
You write so admiringly of a very admirable man (my favorite president too). He stood tall at our nation's lowest point, and shone the light during our darkest hour. Beautifully done, my friend. Big congrats.
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 12:09 PM
Abe is an inspiration to many and he has been one of my inspirations! So I made a pilgrimage to Lincoln Memorial when I went to Washington!! I have read about his life and watched the movie! Thanks for this lovely write and Congrats! He was also a poet, and had good humour “ How long are your legs, Sir?” “They are long enough to reach the earth!!”
La France Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Andrea, you have penned a lovely poem for your fav president and congratulations on your win in the contest, well done _Constance
Duncan Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 1:12 AM
Abe was an Aquarius. They are for the good of all people. So that was his cause in life. Hey, but, this is a great write :)
Garcia Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 7:39 PM
Your poem exceeded my 8 line attention span (it's not you, it's the adhd) so I didnt finish it but I will say it got off to a phenomenal start. I regret not being able to read your wonderful lines about log cabins and new orleans, persistence, and integrity. Perhaps another time. More importantly, I've been on Soup for almost a year now and I'm pretty sure you've had the same profile pic throughout. Time to mix it up, Dietrich!
White Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 8:34 AM
What a great tribute Andrea! If only he could read this himself... That more poets after you will praise him :)
Kannan Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 6:15 AM
Wonderful tribute Andrea... Thanks for sharing... Informative and descriptive....A big 7...Good luck with the contest...
Zerlaut Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 2:00 AM
He really was an amazing president... a wonderful man, and a great humanitarian. Well wrote!
Y. Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 11:34 PM
Hi Andrea, This is a well written tribute to " Honest Abe." I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 10:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to a wonderful man! He had the world in his shoulders. Nice!
B. Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 5:39 PM
You did him justice with your wonderful tribute. I enjoyed this piece. :). Andrea he would have been flattered!
May Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 12:37 PM
Aah.. he was a poet at heart..Great tribute Andrea
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 12:18 PM
what a wonderful tribute Andrea!:-) hugs Jan xx
Alhemaidy Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 9:39 AM
A great man! I used to live in Springfield, IL. His home city. Pithy poem to read.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 4:40 AM
Andrea, I think your tribute to a man I also hold in high esteem, is a fine look into his character and attributes. His melancholy moments are what made him love poetry and be able to write it, in my opinion. A great entry! Best of luck in the contest. 7 ; )
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 2:48 AM
Wow, Andrea! Methinks I just read a winner here!
Soper Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 2:28 AM
well done Andrea.. nice tribute to a great man...
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