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Dedicated to my beloved father AGP

Advance Happy Father's Day, Dada. I love thee with all my heart.

3 June 2026

Ode to my father

My father dearest,
You did not lose your little girl.

Here I stand,
shaped by your wrinkled  hands,
still settling in silken silence
where your velvet voice once lived.
Come, if distance deign to yield 
and take again this hallowed hand of mine.

Tell mom to sing again that lilac lullaby 
she  used to sing as she laid me 
in the hammock you once built for me
listen to the susurrus of 
of a child's whisper who never  went away.

Oh how I deeply long to press my cheeks
upon those weathered hands of yours,
that though worn by labour lost their sheen,
still teaching me what a joy it is to give;
Those hands that love to meet the quill,
and  never failed to write fine verses, 
sonnets, limericks, ghazals and many more.

How I love to see thy  hair in silver strands
that speak the wisdom you truly own
How I adore those wrinkled forehead
that  exudes a shining light ~
 a torch guiding my way back home.

Here in anamnesis, I return
to that farmhouse you once dreamt for me
where water wanders and wafts in surreal haze
where  mango trees bear fruits in abundant grace
I dwell there still, 
enfolded in chrysalism's quiet corner.

On Fathers' Day I'll bring you rouge roses tenderly
with sillage that lingers in your favourite settee
And if June has grace to grant me one last plea,
I'd  go back to our home and spend my days  with thee.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Volumes Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 4:57 PM
My heart gently slowed to a calm pace as I read this wonderful insight to a man so loved. This ode should be treasured as the memories it encapsulates are an everlasting tribute to such a strong bond of tender love. Thanks for sharing.
One Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 1:45 PM
Awww my friend, this is so beautiful, it cant be easy being away from home, especially with no family around... I can feel the love in your poem and it really touched my heart.... Beautifully written with many great lines... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 1:27 PM
poignant and emotional poem, sincerely human and worthy of POTD
Brul Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 12:25 AM
Thank you Sara ^___^
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 7:16 PM
And now I see you got a POTD. Way to go, dear friend
Brul Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 12:25 AM
Thank you dear Andie. ^___^
Goldsmith Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Ode to my father" is a lovely write with a great picture. Have a blessed day/week with your wonderful win...............
Brul Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 12:26 AM
Thank you Paula. Stay sweet ^___^
Godwin Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 8:58 PM
Oh, how marvelous the style is, the phrasing is reminiscent of the Victorian era which I adore, and it works well delivering the full impact of love and emotion that continuously swells and compels a tear - it did mine. I've written many Daddy poems but didn't enter for reasons I'm not sure of; however, you did write and I'm sure this is a winner, but it will never equal the win from such father, daughter love as beautifully shared with readers.
Brul Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 12:27 AM
Thank you Caycay ^___^
M  Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 6:17 PM
Incredibly beautiful JCB…. it touched my heart and made me feel emotional. Congratulations on POTD!! …Deb M
Brul Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 12:26 AM
Thank you Deb ^___^
La France Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 2:30 PM
JCB, beautiful and emotional in remembrance of your father and congratulations on receiving the POTD ~
Brul Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 12:26 AM
Thank yiu dear Heart ^___^
Crandall Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 9:20 PM
A lovely ode to your father!
Brul Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 12:25 AM
Thank you David ^___^
Nicole Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 7:48 PM
Dear JCB, your thoughts caress ever so gently around me and my heart. Moments hold us close, those that our parents so freely give. This is such a beautiful tribute to your father. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Brul Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 3:47 AM
Thank you Brandy. ^___^
George Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 7:27 PM
Beautiful reminiscences of a loving father. We miss our parents more when we grow older..An intimate sharing of a daughter's love for her father. Well done. Congratulations dear Jez on your well deserved POTD honor.
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 7:35 PM
Thank you dear Valsa. I agree that when we grow older we miss them more because we learn to understand them deeper. ^___^
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 1:03 PM
WOW, Amazing! Thank you for sharing this with me! Congratulations on POTD.
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 7:33 PM
Thank you dear Mala. Your visit is always an honour. ^___^
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 11:41 AM
Fave and congrats on POTD!
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 7:33 PM
This FAVE is truly a delight.. Thank you again dear Kim ^___^
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 11:40 AM
Just beautiful! Wonderful tribute to childhood and parents with lovely imagery!
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 7:32 PM
Thank you dear Kim ^___^
Bayles Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 10:44 AM
Very nice tribute to your father. Heartfelt.
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 7:31 PM
Thank you Mike ^__^
Anaya Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 8:08 AM
Dearest JCB, how you cherish your father is so beautiful so warm & a poet as well. A most tender ode, charming. Congratulations on POTD! Enjoy your day. Blessings
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 7:31 PM
Thank you dear Anaya for your visit and tender feedback. ^__^
Croft Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 6:49 AM
congratulations on your POTD, a very nice tribute to your father
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 7:30 PM
Thank you Karen ^___^
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 5:27 AM
Hello JCB Brul :-) Congratulations on POTD! Have a nice weekend!
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 5:29 AM
Thank you Abdullah..Have a nice weekend, too ^___^
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 3:58 AM
poignant and beautiful....congrats on your POTD designation.
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 4:58 AM
Thank you Sara. ^___^
Kitchin Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 3:42 AM
JCB, a beautiful heartfelt poem. Congratulations on POTD.
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 4:58 AM
Thank you dear Tania ^___^
Seeker Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 2:48 AM
Superb. Deep loving sentiments. All heart, all soul. Warmest congratulations on POTD, JCB
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 4:58 AM
Thank you Seeker for your heart-warming feedback^___^
Edmonds  Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 1:13 AM
A wonderful Ode in tribute to your father. Congratulations on you having received the honour of Poem of the Day… Beryl
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 4:57 AM
Thanks Beryl. ^___^
Jones Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 1:09 AM
A beautiful tribute to your dad! Congratulations on potd!
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 4:57 AM
Thank you Karen ^___^
Andresen Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 12:44 AM
- Much love in these lines, JCB ... beautiful :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 4:56 AM
Thank you Anne Lise. ^____^
Cunningham Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 12:33 AM
A beautiful tribute to your father JCB , congratulations to you on your well deserved POTD honour. Tom
Brul Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 4:56 AM
Thank you Tom, you are always the first to congratulate in all POTD poems. ^___^
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